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The Roman Legion

Synonymous of The Roman legion,
Is strength and patriotism,
Courage put to swords!

Determined bloodshed, belligerent war,
Humanity stands the gaff,
Victory or failure ?





Kimos- 10/7/6
Written on 30/6/14
Contest- The Roman Legion
Sponsor- Isaiah Zerbst


Ranked 4th

Copyright © Dr. Upma A. Sharma | Year Posted 2014

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Poet Destroyer A Date: 7/14/2014 10:53:00 PM Upma,, I'm passing by to say hi, and thank you for the reply, you left on the comment I left below... XOX~ LINDA Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 7/7/2014 2:22:00 PM So many victories, and one massive failure. Your poem captures them well, and so deserved of it's win, nice one Upma, James :) Login to Reply

Robert Lindley Date: 7/4/2014 7:42:00 AM Congrats on your win my friend. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/2/2014 1:33:00 AM I like how you questioned its value. I think the romans were often too brutal and they certainly had a great decline. I like this . Login to Reply

Justin Bordner Date: 7/2/2014 1:16:00 AM I admire how intelligently you address the ethics and meaning of the Legion's motivations Upma. I think of the great aphorism, " might makes right ". J.A.B. Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 7/1/2014 7:16:00 AM Hmmm...this is a different take; you give your own 'dressing' to the theme. Short but expressive. Congrats on a worthy win. // paul Login to Reply Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 7/1/2014 9:01:00 AM Thanks Paul ! Ur comments r always sought for! Glad to hv exclusive ones !

Arlene Smith Date: 7/1/2014 6:30:00 AM Congrats on a great win, Dr. Sharma! Hugs.. Arlene Login to Reply Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 7/1/2014 9:02:00 AM Thanks dear Arlene !

Poet Destroyer A Date: 6/30/2014 10:29:00 PM Dr Upma, nice win..PD Login to Reply Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 7/1/2014 9:03:00 AM Thnx PD !