The Road Behind

Familiar face, loving face...
the past back in a flash,
memories of days gone by,
my face weathered by age.

The past back in a flash,
her face looking the same,
my face weathered by age...
a friendly hug, a loving kiss.

Her face looking the same...
a remembered time together;
a friendly hug, a loving kiss,
loving stories exchanged.

A remembered time together...
we laugh, we talk;
loving stories exchanged,
but mainly we yearn.

We laugh, we talk
for what was or what never could be,
but mainly we yearn;
we yearn for lost time, for innocence.

For what was or what never could be
yes, we yearn for ourselves;
we yearn for lost time, for innocence...
we yearn for our lost selves.

Yes, we yearn for ourselves...
did we become better?
we yearn for our lost selves...
why didn't we stay together?

Did we become better - 
the stories finally end;
why didn't we stay together...
we can never go back.

The stories finally end,
memories of days gone by;
we can never go back...
familiar face, loving face.



For "Back to Back" contest sponsored by Paula Swanson.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 3/21/2011 10:29:00 AM
A heartfelt congratulations to you George for your win in Paula's contest "Back To Back". Love, Carol
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Date: 3/21/2011 8:07:00 AM
A wonderful write, I enjoyed the read. Congratulations on your win. Caryl
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Date: 3/20/2011 1:09:00 PM
An awesome write here George.Congrtas on your win--kashinath
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Date: 3/19/2011 1:41:00 AM
excellent George, congrats, to you for this wonderful winner. Harry
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Date: 3/18/2011 3:52:00 PM
Congrats George on your HM in Paula's Pantoum contest .. enjoy your special honor for this vibrant write luv..
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Date: 3/18/2011 11:58:00 AM
Well done on your win : ) Jack
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Date: 3/18/2011 11:35:00 AM
An awesome job my man George, great to see your success.. Congratulations on your worthy victory. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/7/2011 4:28:00 PM
Beautiful George, I have come to really appreciate this form..you did a great job..made me sad..and I guess that is the object. lol. BG
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Date: 3/7/2011 3:27:00 PM
wow, wow, I really like this one of yours. It's so intersting to read from a man feeling this way of a past relationship. I sure hope it does well in the competition. I am feeling unsure about that Love talks haiku/tanka set you just commmented to , becuase I fear that it won't be "interpreted" the way I meant it. I used total personification and symbolism. Do you think you "got it?" bye now, andrea
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