The River We Call the Ness

This river I talk of just has to be seen In it's meandering turns it's simply a dream No matter the season it's flow simply delights Daffodil lined banks of green in typical springtime sight Whether it be azure blue or grey, it's mirror of colours ooze Enticing your eyes to witness as eventually your mind will choose As you see the salmon leaping and the hungry seals in seek The scenery that surrounds this river, will draw your visit, meet Like many stretches of water, if it's in your heart you'll admire If you have witnessed as much as I, you will never ever tire To know where we call this river, in time your answer will be For to adventure to it's meanderings, you'll be standing beside me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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July 15, 2011 at 8:04 AM
Oh I want to go there. Sounds lovely. Nice job my friend. God Bless, JB
Peranteau Avatar
July 6, 2011 at 12:42 PM
So picturesque dear poet ! A beautiful vission James which has me longing for the sites you from time to time enlighten us all with ! Have a wonderful week my friend ! Much love, james
Wesley Avatar
July 6, 2011 at 8:30 AM
Just lovely, peaceful and what I need this morning. Luv Elizabeth
Deane Avatar
July 5, 2011 at 10:45 AM
Wishing I could see and feel for myself, you have described the river beautifully...luv shannon
Ahmad Avatar
July 4, 2011 at 2:24 PM
Took me back to teens when I used to read a lot of stuff about Loch'Ness River and those big monsters....nicely written!
Susan Avatar
July 2, 2011 at 5:56 AM
Sounds lovely! I would love to see it sometime! If I had the money, I'd travel to the UK. I've only been to London, but I really want to go to Ireland and Scotland!
Sweetheart Avatar
June 30, 2011 at 7:32 PM
a charming treat and delight James to learn of the Ness ..does the monster really live there still? good luck in the contest with this amazing and authentic rare beauty luv..
Richards Avatar
June 30, 2011 at 6:48 PM
Oh how I would love to be standing there, and witness what you have described! Lovely! (I can dream of it however!:)
Mehta Avatar
June 30, 2011 at 2:57 PM
Creative and engrossing expressions on river, James
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