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The River Stone

Walking along the river shore
Enjoying the cool crisp fall air
Warm sun upon my face and more
This event in life so rare

Those smooth stones made rounder with age
Some large, some medium, some small
One different rough sharp_rage
Never change_ be rough 'til pall

Maybe place in center river
Where more water, stronger currents
Erase perplexities _sliver
Away ruff edges__deterrents

Can this ruff gruff rock become smooth
Then lay close to smooth rocks and soothe

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/18/2010 5:50:00 AM
Another brilliant piece from you! You should really reconsider my proposal, lol, Your writing is like fresh air filling my lungs, most of the time I don't feel like writing til I read a great piece, that's not going to be a problem thanks to that wonderful mind and talent of yours. Amazing!!
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Date: 10/29/2010 1:27:00 AM
oh such a wonderful peace here my friend duncan
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Date: 10/24/2010 2:46:00 PM
perfection in the pen love it
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Date: 10/24/2010 1:44:00 AM
another beautiful write! I like the profoundness of it.
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Date: 10/23/2010 12:24:00 PM
sort of like,the developing and the search for the ever elusive , "philosophers stone",....nice sara....peace , jay
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Date: 10/23/2010 6:30:00 AM
Splendid write!
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Date: 10/23/2010 5:18:00 AM
Another gem from a poet genious!!! love Michael
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Date: 10/22/2010 2:49:00 PM
try it... might help. wonder can it work on cellulite?
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Date: 10/22/2010 12:40:00 PM
As young man I have noticed those stones getting rounder in many sizes. Thanks , Sara
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Date: 10/22/2010 12:24:00 PM
i like walking and looking at water, i liked this read and can't wait to read some more.
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Date: 10/22/2010 11:46:00 AM
enjoyed your thoughts here Sara....TAH
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