The River of Life

The River of life 

The mountain ice gave birth to a river
Crystal clear down rapids that were an ecstasy
Of sexual pleasure smoothing rocks  
Foaming of joy let it never stop do it again
The stones said. 
But some waterfalls were not so silver-tongued 
Ending in eddies of resentment.
The water became corrupted by overuse as it 
Reached lowland of temptation 
A wide flood running slowly towards the ocean 
Where it will be clear again and regain its innocence 
Alas, it cannot make the journey once more.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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June 21, 2016 at 3:24 AM
It is man kind with his unappeasable thirst for water and his indiscriminate use of it that leaves it tarnished. Good imagery.
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