The River Gomati-Win

O grandma *Gomati, was born on thy bank
And born of a mother bearing your name
On all the yesterdays your water I drank
Am still the part of your pattern and frame.

My blood flows in thy stream meandering
It’s a kind of earthly immortality,
I stand by you and feel kinship endearing
Know not much about gods but your affinity

I learnt to strive, to sink and to seek depth ever
Simply Hydrogen and Oxygen doesn’t make water
Something third is needed to make you what you’re
Nobody knows except you Ma and your Creator.

                             *******
Dr. Ram Mehta
June29, 2011

Twelwth Place win in

Contest: best dedication poem by P.D.

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*Gomati is the name of the river in Gujarat State of India. My home town Dwarka 
where Lord Krishna ruled once, is on the bank of River Gomati. 

My mother too was born there and she was christened as Gomati after the name of the river.

Please click on the links below to see the pictures of River Gomati and the town Dwarka 
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Date: 10/13/2011 9:48:00 AM
I remember this one. I don't think I ever congratulated your win with it. Just stopping by to say hi. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 7/14/2011 10:13:00 PM
Dr. Ram, Congratulations on your contest entry! Thank you for entering your dedicated poem in my contest and also for supporting my contest. Have yourself a great and wonderful night. Sorry for the late congrats,..p.d
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Date: 7/13/2011 4:51:00 PM
Lord Krisna smiled cos you beguiled, and spoke of his river...Gomati
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Date: 7/13/2011 12:01:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Dr Ram. Outstanding piece. Thanks for your comments. Ralph
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Date: 7/13/2011 10:49:00 AM
Congratulations Dr. Ram for your win in the contest "best dedication poem" sponsored by P.D. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/13/2011 10:30:00 AM
congratulations on your win in p.d's contest :)
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Date: 7/13/2011 10:25:00 AM
My Congratulations on your win sponsored by P.D...hugs
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Date: 7/13/2011 8:34:00 AM
Congrats Dr. Ram on your exciting win in PD's contest with this stirring write and entry my friend.. beautiful presentation and images flowing..luv..enjoy..
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Date: 7/13/2011 8:19:00 AM
congrats on your win in PD's contest Dr. Ram
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Date: 7/13/2011 4:50:00 AM
Congrats my friend on this tender tribute..Michael
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Date: 7/8/2011 7:57:00 AM
mmmm : )
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Date: 6/30/2011 11:39:00 PM
oh, is this what you blogged about? HOw nice to see the poem to go with those pictures, Dr. Ram.
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Date: 6/30/2011 8:37:00 PM
Enjoyed this so much Dr. Ram Mehta. Excellent and interesting write here. I love Quatrain writes too.
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Date: 6/30/2011 3:54:00 PM
Great interesting verse Dr Ram, yes we have links to places and times oasises:) India did have it all back before Atlantis fall. Technology seem to come and leave on this planet, over aeons of time. Yes Yoga is good for the soul and calmness too. my problem is i'm semi literate....went to work as a boy, missed the education mostly :)
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Date: 6/30/2011 2:29:00 PM
this was awesome and full of info. love it cory
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Date: 6/30/2011 1:39:00 PM
Rivers are divine to us in India and you have nicely depicted the sacredness of this river Gomti and what a beautiful tribute to your mother who's her namesake...in UP you know Dr Ram, we say Gangaji and Jamnaji and I liked that when I first came here. Good Luck to you and Regards, gautami
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Date: 6/30/2011 6:23:00 AM
I like the sense of immortality you create in this piece. It reminds me of a book I read about a boy who had an experience in a river and consequently remembered every life he had when he was reincarnated. I will check your blog :)
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Date: 6/29/2011 7:21:00 PM
It’s a beauty you have sketched on the canvas of Poetry. For a moment I thought you are mentioning the river Gomti, which flows near Lucknow in U.P,India, but I saw your photo link & recollected the Gomti which you have mentioned & I had seen while visiting your wonderful town Dwarka. It’s a very touching write you have painted in this wonderful poem. My good wishes for your contest entry & thank your kind and precious comments on Radha's Love Song. Love and best wishes .Ravindra...Dr. Mehta
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Date: 6/29/2011 7:13:00 PM
excellent Dr. Ram.. like a beautiful Geography lesson luv.. majestic river .. wonderful information .. good luck in the contest.. appreciate the fantastic footnote..luv..
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Date: 6/29/2011 4:21:00 PM
it is a beautiful write, although i could'nt open up the link
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Date: 6/29/2011 12:17:00 PM
The best to you in the contest Dr. Ram. Love, Carol
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