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The River

Within the raging river I was consumed; In fear I thrashed – with eyes closed there was only darkness. Then, I was awakened and behind the veil I could not hide – I have crossed over to the other side.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 2/6/2018 12:24:00 PM
Your feelings surface and carry the emotional force behind your words. A touching and eloquent description of death.
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Date: 2/5/2018 1:42:00 PM
Nice...I like how you wrote this one...All the best
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