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The River

The River Of Love The river of love springs from the heart gushing over rocks That looked upon her swelled torrents gently and patiently She swirls in comfort in cradled nooks and hidden crevices But whistles to the trusting pebbles to roll on her back In her magical journey of spraying rainbow colours November 25, 2016 River Line - 14 syllables in each line For Rick Parise

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 12/4/2016 11:22:00 PM
Congratulations on this very wonderful write and your fine win my dear friend, Balveen! Hugs and cheers! love, Galeo
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 12/5/2016 10:19:00 AM
Thanks Galeo!
Date: 11/28/2016 1:04:00 AM
The river of love and the love of the river. Congratulations, Kai
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 12/5/2016 10:19:00 AM
Many thanks, Kai!
Date: 11/27/2016 6:57:00 PM
Beautiful intercourse of river and love. Congrats, Balveen!
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 12/5/2016 10:20:00 AM
Thanks & love, Kim!
Date: 11/27/2016 6:33:00 PM
Lovely imagery, Balveen. Congratulations on your fine placement. Hugs, Sandra
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 12/5/2016 10:17:00 AM
Thanks Sandra & love, Balveen
Date: 11/27/2016 10:44:00 AM
Great use of metophor.
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/27/2016 11:19:00 AM
Thanks Richard! Balveen
Date: 11/26/2016 9:05:00 AM
A 7 for this lovely piece, Balveen! Janice
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/27/2016 11:18:00 AM
Oh really Janice? Thanks! Balveen
Date: 11/25/2016 8:04:00 PM
I love the symbolic way you did yours. I chose that route as well. I hope we both get on that winner list!!
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/26/2016 3:55:00 AM
Thanks so much Andrea! Yes, yours is a metaphor of life. Beautifully worded! Lets keep our fingers crossed! Love, Balveen
Date: 11/25/2016 7:17:00 AM
You have created a multitude of images and brought to life the voice of water. Well done Balveen and good luck.
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/25/2016 8:31:00 AM
Thanks for lauding my work Phil!

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