The River

I’m going down to the river today 
And talk to some old friends of mine; 
Sit down by the water’s edge and watch the river roll and wind.  
I pray to converse in the form of free verse 
With all the residents around,
Who call it their home and are rarely alone, in the air or down on the ground.
I’ll spend a few moments in reverie deep
As if on some far away plane,
Thankful to be alive and breath all the sweet air in my veins.
And bow down my head to where I’ve been led
Through all these years come and gone,
For all the triumphs, tears and woes and those once loved and now gone.
Then lift my eyes beyond blue in the skies
And praise the Maker of all things,
This river of life, the darkness and light and reasons and seasons to sing.
Then say fare thee well to this riverside spell
And sanctum of meaningful peace,
And continue to roam in search of the home, forever this soul hopes to reach. 

© Terrell Martin, 01/11/2025

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025



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Date: 1/12/2025 3:11:00 PM
The river of life I sometimes explore through poetry as well. This is very nice and its imagery is powerful. I sense the home you seek is heaven .
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Date: 1/12/2025 4:55:00 PM
Hi Andrea, so very kind of you to drop by and share your thoughts on the "River of live" as a useful poetic theme. And yes, the home I seek is heaven indeed and I hope to meet you there someday. Thanks again & warm wishes ~ Terrell
Date: 1/11/2025 3:51:00 PM
Just beautiful - enjoyed the trip by the river
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Date: 1/11/2025 4:33:00 PM
It looks like you're really making the rounds here today! Thank you again Paige and loved your "Winter Confession." Will be saving you as a "Fav" and visiting again very soon. Write on, Terrell
Date: 1/11/2025 11:10:00 AM
you describe this sanctuary so beautifully Terrell, I found such peace and tranquility reading your lovely lines:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/11/2025 11:47:00 AM
And you're an angel for stopping by and sharing your thoughts, Jan. I'm so glad we connected and appreciate your insight more than you know. Warm wishes, Terrell
Date: 1/11/2025 8:51:00 AM
Dear Terrell, I enjoyed your lush longer lines where imagery and thought were allowed to expand and I admire your use of internal rhymes. A soulful, spiritual introspection filled with tenderness and gratitude. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 1/11/2025 11:02:00 AM
Thank you, Susan, for allowing me to expound on thoughts of a river I frequently visited as a child. It was the Hillsborough River if you're at all familiar with central Florida that I woke up thinking about early this morning. Thankfully, the poem wrote itself. Thanks again and warm wishes to you as well. /// Terrell
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