The River

Stepping on the rocks
While the river goes by me
What a peaceful day
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Hensley Avatar
May 19, 2009 at 2:12 PM
I really like this Haiku reminds me of the how i love the sound of river flwoing near me!
Esquire Avatar
March 12, 2009 at 5:52 PM
Dear Elizabeth, I join YOU in YOUR LOVE of NATURE, Blessings to YOU and YOURS ALWAYS...HG
Lopez Avatar
February 19, 2009 at 2:09 PM
this reminds me of the many streams and creeks i have fished .......nice imagery
Gass Avatar
February 15, 2009 at 6:05 PM
Great imagery in this, Elizabeth! Lovely Haiku! Love, Robin
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February 13, 2009 at 4:30 PM
This one has me smiling. I feel at peace by the water so can really relate to your words. Nice use of this short form. Enjoyed it. Karen
Jordan Avatar
February 12, 2009 at 4:54 PM
Elizabeth this is a wonderful haiku - I can see you hopping from rock to rock - God Bless, MJ
Wilson Avatar
February 12, 2009 at 4:32 PM
This is soothing. Thanks.
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