The Ripple Effect Premiere Contest Winner

Of mountainous harmonic highs everlasting sacred skies, meadows evergreens
Our Love swiftly soars beyond the seraphical shores, of everlasting dreams
A ripple in the parental pond a wizard waving wand, love bewitchingly beams
Like birds in their native nests Love rarely rests, feeding on sensual streams

Love may take a waiting while you surrender to its smile, you give and receive
Once you've been bit you sacrificially shall submit, to the thriving thieve
It steals your humble heart as you comply and compart, to conquer and deceive
Like a rose in disguise chasing beauty and chastise, in the end we always grieve

But Love carries on like a softly swimming swan, thru ripples to the end of time
Come what may Love will always Satyr stray and rivetingly romantically rhyme.





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Date: 7/11/2017 11:45:00 PM
Congratulations for a great poem!
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Date: 7/10/2017 1:29:00 PM
Lovely piece, WW. Congratulations on your First Place Win (and the coveted Trophy emoji!!). Regards, John.
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Date: 7/10/2017 9:20:00 AM
Congrats on trophy win, WW:) very well deserved :)
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Date: 7/10/2017 12:33:00 AM
What beautiful phrases you write! Congrats on you well deserved trophy win.
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Date: 7/9/2017 8:17:00 PM
Congrats on your trophy win. Enjoy. You deserve it.
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Date: 7/9/2017 9:28:00 PM
Thank you Janis...very kind of you my friend...god bless.
Date: 7/9/2017 7:27:00 PM
Congratulations on your top win, Winged Warrior! Janice
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Winged Warrior
Date: 7/9/2017 9:27:00 PM
Thank you much Janice...god bless...^WW^
Date: 7/9/2017 6:37:00 PM
Congrats ^WW^ ,for your well-deserved first placement with this awesomely, penned piece! ;-)
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Winged Warrior
Date: 7/9/2017 9:26:00 PM
Thank you so much, my friend...god bless...^WW^
Date: 7/9/2017 3:56:00 PM
Congrats, WW on your well deserved win
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Winged Warrior
Date: 7/9/2017 4:23:00 PM
Thank you, White Wolf...I may say the same to you my friend...all the best...^WW^
Date: 7/5/2017 9:24:00 AM
I find this rather sad, WW. Well written, good luck my friend:)
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Winged Warrior
Date: 7/9/2017 9:25:00 PM
Thank you Daniel...most poems are lol...god bless...^WW^
Date: 7/5/2017 9:05:00 AM
Fantastic poem WW, this one makes me ponder...Maria.
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Winged Warrior
Date: 7/9/2017 9:23:00 PM
Thank you, my dear friend...god bless...^WW^
Date: 7/5/2017 1:38:00 AM
Lovely rhyme, ^WW^, well thought out deep poem:)
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Winged Warrior
Date: 7/9/2017 9:21:00 PM
Thank you Jo...god bless...^WW^
Date: 7/4/2017 4:23:00 PM
A "softly swimming swan..." Is there nothing more graceful than such a vision? You've become enamored with alliteration and yet you never overwhelm your writes with it. Super write, ^WW^ and I like your new avatar.
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Date: 7/4/2017 6:12:00 PM
Thank you, my lady Lin...and your new avatar is beautiful within and throughout...god bless...^WW^
Date: 7/4/2017 3:33:00 PM
I am fancying this one. And by the way, your Avatar is soooo cool! :)
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Winged Warrior
Date: 7/4/2017 3:36:00 PM
Thank you so kindly Akkina...your avatar is quite the catch too lol...god bless...^WW^
Date: 7/4/2017 3:08:00 PM
Fabulous work WW, one of your best..
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Date: 7/4/2017 3:15:00 PM
Thank you, Sir Charles lol...god bless...^WW^
Date: 7/4/2017 2:10:00 PM
A stunning write, WW! Great subject matter, great rhyme, and flow! Absolutely love it, my friend! really well done
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Date: 7/4/2017 2:14:00 PM
Thank you my Wolfie friend...god bless...^WW^
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