Premiere Contest WinnerThe Ripple Effect

Of mountainous harmonic highs everlasting sacred skies, meadows evergreens
Our Love swiftly soars beyond the seraphical shores, of everlasting dreams
A ripple in the parental pond a wizard waving wand, love bewitchingly beams
Like birds in their native nests Love rarely rests, feeding on sensual streams

Love may take a waiting while you surrender to its smile, you give and receive
Once you've been bit you sacrificially shall submit, to the thriving thieve
It steals your humble heart as you comply and compart, to conquer and deceive
Like a rose in disguise chasing beauty and chastise, in the end we always grieve

But Love carries on like a softly swimming swan, thru ripples to the end of time
Come what may Love will always Satyr stray and rivetingly romantically rhyme.





July.04.2017
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Malenfant Avatar
July 11, 2017 at 11:45 PM
Congratulations for a great poem!
Michaels Avatar
July 10, 2017 at 1:29 PM
Lovely piece, WW. Congratulations on your First Place Win (and the coveted Trophy emoji!!). Regards, John.
Daniel Avatar
July 10, 2017 at 9:20 AM
Congrats on trophy win, WW:) very well deserved :)
Nusker Avatar
July 10, 2017 at 12:33 AM
What beautiful phrases you write! Congrats on you well deserved trophy win.
Medders Tobechi Avatar
July 9, 2017 at 8:17 PM
Congrats on your trophy win. Enjoy. You deserve it.
Warrior Avatar
July 9, 2017 at 9:28 PM
Thank you Janis...very kind of you my friend...god bless.
Canerdy Avatar
July 9, 2017 at 7:27 PM
Congratulations on your top win, Winged Warrior! Janice
Warrior Avatar
July 9, 2017 at 9:27 PM
Thank you much Janice...god bless...^WW^
Kimathi Avatar
July 9, 2017 at 6:37 PM
Congrats ^WW^ ,for your well-deserved first placement with this awesomely, penned piece! ;-)
Warrior Avatar
July 9, 2017 at 9:26 PM
Thank you so much, my friend...god bless...^WW^
Wolf Avatar
July 9, 2017 at 3:56 PM
Congrats, WW on your well deserved win
Warrior Avatar
July 9, 2017 at 4:23 PM
Thank you, White Wolf...I may say the same to you my friend...all the best...^WW^
Turner Avatar
July 5, 2017 at 9:24 AM
I find this rather sad, WW. Well written, good luck my friend:)
Warrior Avatar
July 9, 2017 at 9:25 PM
Thank you Daniel...most poems are lol...god bless...^WW^
Williams Avatar
July 5, 2017 at 9:05 AM
Fantastic poem WW, this one makes me ponder...Maria.
Warrior Avatar
July 9, 2017 at 9:23 PM
Thank you, my dear friend...god bless...^WW^
Daniel Avatar
July 5, 2017 at 1:38 AM
Lovely rhyme, ^WW^, well thought out deep poem:)
Warrior Avatar
July 9, 2017 at 9:21 PM
Thank you Jo...god bless...^WW^
Lane Avatar
July 4, 2017 at 4:23 PM
A "softly swimming swan..." Is there nothing more graceful than such a vision? You've become enamored with alliteration and yet you never overwhelm your writes with it. Super write, ^WW^ and I like your new avatar.
Warrior Avatar
July 4, 2017 at 6:12 PM
Thank you, my lady Lin...and your new avatar is beautiful within and throughout...god bless...^WW^
Downing  Avatar
July 4, 2017 at 3:33 PM
I am fancying this one. And by the way, your Avatar is soooo cool! :)
Warrior Avatar
July 4, 2017 at 3:36 PM
Thank you so kindly Akkina...your avatar is quite the catch too lol...god bless...^WW^
Smith Avatar
July 4, 2017 at 3:08 PM
Fabulous work WW, one of your best..
Warrior Avatar
July 4, 2017 at 3:15 PM
Thank you, Sir Charles lol...god bless...^WW^
Wolf Avatar
July 4, 2017 at 2:10 PM
A stunning write, WW! Great subject matter, great rhyme, and flow! Absolutely love it, my friend! really well done
Warrior Avatar
July 4, 2017 at 2:14 PM
Thank you my Wolfie friend...god bless...^WW^
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