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The Ripple Effect

Of mountainous harmonic highs everlasting sacred skies, meadows evergreens Our Love swiftly soars beyond the seraphical shores, of everlasting dreams A ripple in the parental pond a wizard waving wand, love bewitchingly beams Like birds in their native nests Love rarely rests, feeding on sensual streams Love may take a waiting while you surrender to its smile, you give and receive Once you've been bit you sacrificially shall submit, to the thriving thieve It steals your humble heart as you comply and compart, to conquer and deceive Like a rose in disguise chasing beauty and chastise, in the end we always grieve But Love carries on like a softly swimming swan, thru ripples to the end of time Come what may Love will always Satyr stray and rivetingly romantically rhyme. July.04.2017 The Creative Collective Anthology Series Sponsored by: Geraldine Taylor Happy 4th to my US buds and buddets lol

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Jerome Malenfant

Date: 7/11/2017 11:45:00 PM

Congratulations for a great poem!

John Michaels

Date: 7/10/2017 1:29:00 PM

Lovely piece, WW. Congratulations on your First Place Win (and the coveted Trophy emoji!!). Regards, John.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 7/10/2017 9:20:00 AM

Congrats on trophy win, WW:) very well deserved :)

Afzal Nusker

Date: 7/10/2017 12:33:00 AM

What beautiful phrases you write! Congrats on you well deserved trophy win.

Janis Medders Tobechi

Date: 7/9/2017 8:17:00 PM

Congrats on your trophy win. Enjoy. You deserve it.

Winged Warrior
Date: 7/9/2017 9:28:00 PM

Thank you Janis...very kind of you my friend...god bless.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 7/9/2017 7:27:00 PM

Congratulations on your top win, Winged Warrior! Janice

Winged Warrior
Date: 7/9/2017 9:27:00 PM

Thank you much Janice...god bless...^WW^

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 7/9/2017 6:37:00 PM

Congrats ^WW^ ,for your well-deserved first placement with this awesomely, penned piece! ;-)

Winged Warrior
Date: 7/9/2017 9:26:00 PM

Thank you so much, my friend...god bless...^WW^

White Wolf

Date: 7/9/2017 3:56:00 PM

Congrats, WW on your well deserved win

Winged Warrior
Date: 7/9/2017 4:23:00 PM

Thank you, White Wolf...I may say the same to you my friend...all the best...^WW^

Daniel Turner

Date: 7/5/2017 9:24:00 AM

I find this rather sad, WW. Well written, good luck my friend:)

Winged Warrior
Date: 7/9/2017 9:25:00 PM

Thank you Daniel...most poems are lol...god bless...^WW^

Maria Williams

Date: 7/5/2017 9:05:00 AM

Fantastic poem WW, this one makes me ponder...Maria.

Winged Warrior
Date: 7/9/2017 9:23:00 PM

Thank you, my dear friend...god bless...^WW^

Joanna Daniel

Date: 7/5/2017 1:38:00 AM

Lovely rhyme, ^WW^, well thought out deep poem:)

Winged Warrior
Date: 7/9/2017 9:21:00 PM

Thank you Jo...god bless...^WW^

Lin Lane

Date: 7/4/2017 4:23:00 PM

A "softly swimming swan..." Is there nothing more graceful than such a vision? You've become enamored with alliteration and yet you never overwhelm your writes with it. Super write, ^WW^ and I like your new avatar.

Winged Warrior
Date: 7/4/2017 6:12:00 PM

Thank you, my lady Lin...and your new avatar is beautiful within and throughout...god bless...^WW^