The Rip - Bite Sized 79

Like an almighty cauldron, 
Curling and twirling, 
Stirred by the sea, 
It came bashing, 
As a torrential torrent 
Pounding endlessly.

seafree verse

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Linda Alice Fowler

December 22, 2023 at 9:47 AM

Great image Svvie! I can hear it from here. :)

Speaks Volumes

December 25, 2023 at 3:07 PM

I think he read my poem before creating the picture Laf ! Thanks for your comment dear friend.

Paula Goldsmith

December 19, 2023 at 7:10 AM

I enjoyed reading your powerful write/picture. Have a Very Blessed Christmas & New Year 2023.......................

Speaks Volumes

December 20, 2023 at 4:16 PM

I am glad that you liked it Paula. Thank you for your lovely comment

Sotto Poet

December 18, 2023 at 12:00 PM

Dear SV, I was enchanted by the graceful cadence and enchanting beat of the words as they flowed. The poem painted a vivid picture of perilous weather that resembled an awful cauldron, raging and roiling due to the influence of the vast ocean. It fell tirelessly onto the shores, hitting constantly like an unyielding tempest.

Speaks Volumes

December 18, 2023 at 4:01 PM

Thank you so very much Lasaard. Wen