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The Rink

he grabs the safety bars rolls and falls rolls and falls remembers baby steps until he dabs and his skates shave the air neon reds and blues and greens in the party atmospheric rink where music records his groovy feet 2/20/2018

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Date: 2/21/2018 2:01:00 PM
You paint a very descriptive picture, filled with motion and color with these words, Kim. Thank you for sharing. Elaine
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/21/2018 2:09:00 PM
Thanks, Elaine!
Date: 2/21/2018 6:50:00 AM
Unique lines like..skates shave the air..and music records his groovy feet. A creative rendering, Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/21/2018 6:59:00 AM
Thanks so much, dear Vijay!
Date: 2/21/2018 6:12:00 AM
I love how you described this!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/21/2018 6:59:00 AM
Thank you so much, my friend!
Date: 2/21/2018 1:59:00 AM
Haha, sounds like me, two left feet on ice. You either can or you can't. I cant. Tom.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/21/2018 4:23:00 AM
Glad you enjoyed! I only watch now, though I want to join in!

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