Kim Rodrigues Poet Light Verse

The Rink

he grabs the safety bars
rolls and falls
rolls and falls
remembers baby steps
until he dabs
and his skates shave the air
neon reds and blues and greens
in the party atmospheric rink
where music records his groovy feet

2/20/2018

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Elaine George February 21, 2018 at 2:01 PM You paint a very descriptive picture, filled with motion and color with these words, Kim. Thank you for sharing. Elaine Kim Rodrigues February 21, 2018 at 2:09 PM Thanks, Elaine!

Vijay Pandit February 21, 2018 at 6:50 AM Unique lines like..skates shave the air..and music records his groovy feet. A creative rendering, Kim! Kim Rodrigues February 21, 2018 at 6:59 AM Thanks so much, dear Vijay!

Silent One February 21, 2018 at 6:12 AM I love how you described this! Kim Rodrigues February 21, 2018 at 6:59 AM Thank you so much, my friend!

Tom Cunningham February 21, 2018 at 1:59 AM Haha, sounds like me, two left feet on ice. You either can or you can't. I cant. Tom. Kim Rodrigues February 21, 2018 at 4:23 AM Glad you enjoyed! I only watch now, though I want to join in!