The Ring Around

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When the Bubonic Plague overtook Europe years ago,the dead bodies needed to be cremated because 60% of the population was affected! One symptom of the plague was a rosy colored rash that appeared as a ring on the skin. That is where the first line of the nursery rhyme comes from. Posies were the sweet smelling herbs that folks carried in their pockets to fight the terrible smell of the disease, which they superstitiously believed was carried by bad smell. Today children sing this little nursery rhyme while holding hands in a ring and then falling down at the end of it. I know as a child I had no idea of this little song's origin. 

A funny anecdote about my daughter. When she was very young, she had a speech problem and had difficulty pronouncing many sounds. On the public bus one day she was chanting loudly: ASSES ASSES.  I was horrified and made her be quiet. Later that week I saw her twirling outside and falling down as she said those words. I then realized she had been trying to say Ashes Ashes!
*“Ring around the Rosy. A pocketful of posies. Ashes, Ashes, we all fall down.” - a nursery rhyme Gone to ashes. Each town was a burial ground gone to ashes. Multitudes wore rosy rashes; The Black Death’s ring was on them found. Dead bodies smoldered all around. . . . gone to ashes. Now children chant “Ashes, ashes,” while in a ring. Now children chant and they’re strangely exuberant! Of pockets of posies they sing and think not of one deathly thing! Now children chant. Written by Andrea Dietrich/ Feb. 16, 2012 and inspired by nette onclaud's ALPHABETS OF RONDELET Poetry Contest (I chose Ashes, but also Chant was used in verse two). *Please click on "about this poem" to see the origin of the nursery rhyme it discusses.

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Date: 8/16/2013 1:56:00 AM
Bravo Andrea, and you are so right children go through early years in all innocence of what has passed and what or whom they sing about. Such a shame it has to be spoilt in time. Digging through some past ones I've missed...
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Date: 2/21/2012 12:41:00 PM
There have been written some amazing rondelets for this contest. But this Andrea, scores highest for me. I am completely floored. Congratulations!!!! and also loved to know the origin of this nursery rhyme. Never knew there could be so much behind this merry, light hearted song... shall come back to read this again...huggs
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Date: 2/20/2012 4:33:00 PM
Wonderful write and nice flow,Andrea..Congratulations on your well deserved win in Nette`s contest...And Thanks for your comments on my poems....you are a source of inspiration....keep writing and flying...
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Date: 2/20/2012 3:54:00 PM
congrats on your contest win andrea, I'm not usually a fan of repetitive forms, but this is one of the best I've read, and thanks so much for my placement in your contest, there were some lovely tankas :-)
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Date: 2/20/2012 3:51:00 PM
I think we all did ring around the rosy so will have a look at your note. love phyl
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Date: 2/20/2012 2:23:00 PM
Andrea, This is wonderful. I applaud the detail and thought put into this. The way you combined the nursery rhyme, that made it special. Very well done. Congrats on making the winners list in Nette's contest...................S.Ronthorpe
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Date: 2/20/2012 12:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in ~Nette's~ "Alphabets Of Rondelet" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/20/2012 11:16:00 AM
I had forgotten Andrea about Ring around the Rosy being based on the black plague. Great story and rondelet about it. Thanks for recalling it for me. Congratulations on another win. Love, joyce
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Date: 2/20/2012 10:56:00 AM
Hi Andrea ,Congratulations on your win In Nette's contest.Yours is only one entry which has two words.Enjoyed the read.
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Date: 2/20/2012 9:45:00 AM
congrats Andrea on a huge success with this captivating entry luv.. so awesome as always..
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Date: 2/20/2012 4:39:00 AM
i read your notes andie and so much fun with your shares about your daughter... a chraming, dainty piece that truky delights... congrats on your super win in my contest! :) huggs
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Date: 2/19/2012 8:06:00 PM
love the historic content, sad days of old for sure... good poetry here... said the raven nuttin more...
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Date: 2/19/2012 3:43:00 PM
Wow, such a powerful piece, Andrea. We sing this one over here too. Yes, LOL, those gifts were for Sue - she wanted cartoon DVDs this year (the original Tintin series and I've pre-ordered the new Tintin film for her)
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Date: 2/18/2012 10:38:00 PM
A great poem, Andrea! I knew the origin of this nursery rhyme and was always disturbed by it. When my son wants to do it, I change the words. Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 2/18/2012 7:51:00 PM
Well done Andrea- very good, Brenda : )
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Date: 2/18/2012 1:42:00 PM
It just goes to show that if you put music to words and promote it as what’s in, then people will repeat it never knowing the true meaning. When words lose their meaning we are doomed as a society. Can anybody explain the meaning of A Bad Romance? That’s like saying it’s a dry wet….
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Date: 2/18/2012 11:18:00 AM
Congratulations to a couple of Rondelets well done! I really enjoyed these Rondelets this afternoon Andrea! I remember this song when we used to sing it as kids while swinging around in a circle(ring around the rosyes) and holding hands then sitting(we all fall down) at the end of the song! A great playing song! I learned in High School the real meaning of the song, it was very eerie! Scarey! I loved your poem today my friend! Great Work!!
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Date: 2/18/2012 11:03:00 AM
Very good approach to do the contest Andrea.Beautifully written.Best wishes for the contest.
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Date: 2/18/2012 10:03:00 AM
The origin of nursery rhymes, and Mother Goose is fascinating. Children are too young to realize the horror of the black death, even if they know origin of "all fall down." I wonder - are there nursery rhymes about the Jewish extermination? Luck in the contest. Love, daver
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Date: 2/18/2012 8:42:00 AM
a taste of the bitter part of life in these emphatic words for Nette ..Andrea.. so sad the destruction .. impressive expressions for feeling deep emotion .. goodf luck luv..
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Date: 2/18/2012 4:49:00 AM
Very sad but wonderful write.
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Date: 2/18/2012 3:50:00 AM
Agree with Red......You are brilliant!! - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 2/18/2012 2:15:00 AM
Andre this was really really a marvellous write...and sad too..u showed the pain and suffering too here..cheers !
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