Michael J. Falotico Poet Couplet

The Right Time

We met each other at the right time..
                                        Words that echo in such a small rhyme..
                               We played a game in which we both were bruised..
                                     Never touching the floor but still we cruised..
                               We each carried a light to brighten each others way..
                         Not sure if we knew at the time how we saved the others day..
                             But at least now we can reflect without doubt and despair...
                           To walk our paths and never know how not to love and care..

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 12, 2011 at 5:45 PM am so happy u enjoyed reading all my creative contest entries Michael luv.. yes I was a wild child .. and luved to dance four times a week in various clubs in NYC and NJ and Philly too..but now the memories remain..of the good old days before marriage...now are u ready for football? predictions yet? they are saying the GIANTS are NOT in trouble.. they are solid according to commentators.. and those Birds are NOT the dream team.. so knock it off please..ugh.. Jets have Plax..so who knows..luv..

Andrea Dietrich July 5, 2011 at 12:37 AM Thanks, Michael, for this lovely example here of how to present a poem for your contest. I'm glad I finally saw it. The person certainly came into your life at the "right time!"

Jun-Jun Villanueva July 3, 2011 at 1:29 AM hope to write as beautiful as yours...^_^ junjun

Elaine George July 2, 2011 at 10:23 PM Beautiful, Michael. Lainie

Carolyn Devonshire July 2, 2011 at 12:39 PM Have you read "The Celestine Prophecies," Michael? It talks about people who come into our lives, often for just a short period, but when we need them most. I do hope I can write for this contest because there are special people who have made such a difference to me. Does it have to be about just one person? Can it be a group of people with common interests? Love and blessings, Carolyn

Wilma Neels July 2, 2011 at 11:15 AM A beautiful piece on friendship Michael, hope you are enjoying your time off work and your weekend.. love Wilma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 1, 2011 at 9:16 PM thankxx Michael..so wonderful that u enjoyed Feeling U... special lines for special times.. thankxx luv.. J.G. in feeling u mode ...oh.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 1, 2011 at 8:18 PM beautiful stunning example poem for your newest contest Michael.. my entry is longer and more intricate ..hope u enjoy luv.. and much success .. always amazed at your creative streak..your Jersey Girl is thoughtful mode luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta July 1, 2011 at 2:58 PM Lovely dedication with feelings and affection, Michael

T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet July 1, 2011 at 1:58 PM Hey really done a wonderful job with this one Michael.It was a joy for me to include a sweet friend as yourself in my poem.Thanks for the kind congrats and placing my poem in your contest.~LOTS OF LUV~Teresa

Constance La France July 1, 2011 at 10:24 AM Beautiful words drip from your pen, Michael. I am looking forward to writing my poem for you~~

Dinda Minardi July 1, 2011 at 9:04 AM Awww, this poem itself is beautiful, Michael. And the dedication, wow... you deserve a friend like that :)

Kash Poet July 1, 2011 at 8:46 AM Very nice dedication to your friend Michael...enjoyed.

Michael J. Falotico July 1, 2011 at 7:49 AM Dedicated to a dear friend who I know at times still peaks in here to read me.... I wouldn't be me without you...period.... Michael