The Right Stuff

I sat watching from across the bar,
As she toyed with her entourage of suitors;
Feeding each man small pieces of hope -
Her coquettish smile couldn’t be much cuter.

Her drinks were free; her blouse cut low;
She laughed at all of their jokes.
But, she always made sure, she was never alone
With just a single one of those blokes.

Some lesser men gave up the fight
When the stronger ones started moving in;
I caught her eye through the haze and the crowd
And sent her a tonic and gin.

When the waiter handed her the glass,
And mentioned it was being sent by me,
The huddle of studs all turned their heads,
At this pomposity they just had to see.

They snickered and sneered at the old man on the stool
Who was certainly no competition at all
They looked at each other, rolled their eyes
And simultaneously let out a hefty guffaw

She excused herself to go powder up
Leaving the hopeful combatants all alone
Then walked up to me, kissed me on the lips
And said, “Come on Dear, it’s time to go home.”

She slipped back on the ring I bought her years ago,
Feeling her vanity had been restored quite enough;
I paid my bar tab, looked back at the dropping jaws
And said, “Sorry boys, you don’t have the right stuff.”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Williams Avatar
May 9, 2012 at 11:24 AM
Joe congrats on your win..David
Brown Avatar
May 7, 2012 at 12:46 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the "Tell us of Women" contest Joe. Love, Carol
Quigley Avatar
May 7, 2012 at 8:48 AM
Love this Joe. Bravo
Collins Avatar
May 3, 2012 at 8:10 AM
A great joy to read Joe. You are on your game. Kathy
Williams Avatar
April 28, 2012 at 12:22 PM
ha Joe, fantastic, that's all, ..David.. still thinking for your contest by the way.
Macfarlane Avatar
April 28, 2012 at 10:29 AM
Awesome write Joe....love the ending!
Bauer Avatar
April 28, 2012 at 7:25 AM
this is clever and creative, with a wonderful twist at the end! nice one!
The Drunken Poet Avatar
April 28, 2012 at 12:03 AM
WOW STUPENDOUS WRITE!!! This was also very articulate and funny at the end...
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