Get Your Premium Membership

The Right One

When you are twenty You feel your heart burst. You think you're in love, This time's your first. But time moves on And you fall out of love. You meet someone else Who must be sent from above. More meaningful now Than when you were younger. Your heart beats harder And it feels like thunder. But time once again Changes how you feel. You have new doubts, Is this one for real? The cycle plays out Over years and years. Excruciating happiness Followed by tears. "Til one day, unexpected, You look up and find The one who touches you heart Also touches your mind. And now you know That this is the one. The rest never mattered They were just there for fun. When you're about ready To swear off them all Along comes the right one To answer the call. Never give up, Hold out for the best. Take time to find true love And pass on the rest. for Spencer

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 8/17/2010 6:48:00 AM
Just stopping by to remind you of my newest contest The Birds And The Bees. I hope you will enter the contest if you haven't already Francine. Thank you if you have already entered or plan on entering. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 8/6/2010 7:08:00 AM
Many congratulations Francine on your win in Carol's fine contest. Spencer will find the right one at the right time,and when he does he'll know >> James
Login to Reply
Date: 8/5/2010 7:04:00 PM
Spencer hasn't found the right one yet, this was my way of telling him to be patient
Login to Reply
Date: 8/5/2010 6:48:00 PM
Congratulations to you and Spencer for finding the right one. Loved it. congratulations on you for being among the top ten winners. Love, Joyce
Login to Reply
Date: 8/5/2010 5:32:00 PM
Congrats on the win, Francine
Login to Reply
Date: 8/5/2010 5:01:00 PM
Mind level Love is so fickled, hun Francine. Smile. Congratulations on your success in the contest. Agape, Moses
Login to Reply
Date: 8/5/2010 1:39:00 PM
Congrats Francine on your winning poem in Carol's contest with this wonderful write and win today.. enjoy another momentous victory at the winners circle..with luv...
Login to Reply
Date: 8/5/2010 1:26:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in my contest Francine. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 8/2/2010 10:50:00 PM
Very hopeful message, thanks for penning these sentiments in a refreshing style, easy to read and take in.
Login to Reply
Date: 8/2/2010 10:20:00 PM
Very Well written piece with good rhyme and sound advice my friend.....Larry
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs