The Right Choices

The Right Choices

There are those who have gladly made their drugs of choice.
Then, there are those whose choices took away their voice.                           

When just a little lad, I stealthily opened our refrigerator,                                   and experienced such distaste as I secretly drank hard liquor.

Fortunately, for me, neither of my parents ever discovered my crime.
In addition, thankfully, I never acquired a taste for drinking a second time.

And also when just a lad, with friends I secretly took puffs from cigarettes.
Again, I escaped detection; and for this deed, my parents never had to protest.

O, the deeds of a child that often remain hidden and never remedied.
But then, there are those who early on, choose rightly by God’s Grace alone.                              

They make better choices; drugs never being among them.
And O, what pain we avoid, by making the right choices.
05302016  PS Contest, That Colorful Drug, by Lewis Raynes; HM
Contest, Any HM ever, Laura Loo; 5th Pl.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 4/14/2017 11:31:00 PM
So many choices we have to make in life and by God's grace we will make the right ones. Congrats on your win, Curtis! Blessings, Kim
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Date: 4/10/2017 8:23:00 AM
if only everyone learned how to make the right choices- but some just can't put down the bottle with ease...sorry for the delayed comment! thank you :)-luloo
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Curtis Johnson
Date: 4/10/2017 12:16:00 PM
Thanks for your comments Laura. GBU
Date: 6/3/2016 2:44:00 AM
Congrats Curtis! I wish all made better choices!
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Curtis Johnson
Date: 6/3/2016 12:08:00 PM
Thank you Balveen
Date: 5/30/2016 10:20:00 PM
Well written poem... enjoyed reading GL
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Curtis Johnson
Date: 6/2/2016 9:38:00 AM
Thank you Probir
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