The Ride of My Life

How many of us, go down in history Well she went down on me, just you wait and read It happened ten tears ago, boy was it out of this world The moment she took me in, boy her kisses swirled We were so suited, atmospheric was our attraction Bare to naked I was, receiving her reaction Cheeky was this first Lieutenant, her hands everywhere I succumbed to her intentions, near explosive was my stare It's only when I looked down, two eyes espied in pout Pleasured by her wanting, me I'm inside out I found myself amidst, convulsions so far from home Lost in pleasured dome, ring a ring a rosy roamed Taken, spent I am, we rejoiced in our elation History has been made, communication on the Space Station .
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
November 3, 2014 at 9:15 PM
I love the ten tears ago line.... :) whether it's deliberate or not the impact to me is something different.. :)//olive eloisa :D
Fraser Avatar
November 10, 2014 at 4:28 PM
Such a write makes an impact on the two, James :) :)
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