Home » Poems » Victor Buhagiar » The Ride

Victor Buhagiar | + Follow Poet |

The Ride

Poet's Notes

(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Victor Buhagiar.

Write Five Beautiful Lines' Contest

Sponsor

Constance La France

She rode unsaddled on the mighty horse. Her hazel hair flew haphazardly and coarse. They crossed the rippling river, laughing with flair. They rode to the ranch, her husband waited there. Yet she needed his love and climbed quickly upstairs. Placed 2

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/15/2025 1:11:00 PM

Those are five beautiful lines Victor, the picture and poem are exquisite. Congratulations on your win.

Lin Lane

Date: 3/15/2025 11:44:00 AM

I love everything about your lines and your photo. Horses have always been part of my life.

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 3/15/2025 10:09:00 AM

Back with congratulations on your win in Constance’s contest Victor… Beryl

John Read

Date: 3/15/2025 9:00:00 AM

I wonder why they rushed quickly upstairs lol. Congratulations on your contest win Victor.

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 3/15/2025 8:01:00 AM

Hahaha! The typical Victor romantic interlude, a fixed feature in your superb poems! Warmest congratulations on your win

Victor Buhagiar
Date: 3/15/2025 8:05:00 AM

Thanks.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/15/2025 2:39:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win, Victor :) - hugs

thriveni c mysore

Date: 3/15/2025 2:32:00 AM

beautiful. congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers!!!

Paige Hind

Date: 3/14/2025 6:54:00 PM

A lovely poem!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/14/2025 4:58:00 PM

A force! A joyous write!

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 3/14/2025 1:57:00 PM

A wonderful five lines Victor, poem and picture, perfect… Beryl

Michael Tor

Date: 3/13/2025 10:20:00 PM

Lovely imagery and romance Victor...

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh

Date: 3/13/2025 8:06:00 PM

Such beautiful lines and picture.How charming it might be

CayCay Jennings

Date: 3/13/2025 8:15:00 AM

She said write 5 beautiful lines, not 5 *o*ny lines! I'm just messing with you. The write delivers fun and beautiful imagery in measure. I wish I were her, except I know what those seagulls are going to do. Why do I turn silly every time I leave you a comment? Really, do you know why? Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Joseph May

Date: 3/13/2025 7:12:00 AM

Nicely penned Victor, best wishes

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/13/2025 5:11:00 AM

Ahh!! It reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Sara K

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/13/2025 2:08:00 AM

- A lovely poem, Victor :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs

Yann Rolland

Date: 3/12/2025 4:51:00 PM

brilliant images , enjoyed this creative poem, and "love talking", thanks poet

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 3/12/2025 2:48:00 PM

I love the striking contrasts of this poem, Victor. The openness and freedom of the wide, wild outdoors, and the sudden calm of the romantic conclusion, is a lovely variance. :)