The Rib

He ran his hands over my body
Like he was searching for a place
He could begin to pry me open
Without ruining my face

More snake than human I am
Undeserving of the gift 
His hands delved into my body 
Like he was taking back the rib
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February 23, 2025 at 10:54 AM
Like.
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December 20, 2024 at 12:13 PM
I love this. Great writing, Madi.
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December 6, 2024 at 7:52 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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