The Rhone

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Story taken from https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/RMS_Rhone

 


A UK Royal Mail Ship was RMS Rhone
A sail-steamer and a two-masted brig, she shone

Rhone had an iron hull and was 310 feet long
Her compound steam engine made her fast and quite strong

An innovative ship with a bronze propeller
To save water, she had a surface condenser

The first ship so equipped to visit Brazil port
Pedro II, the king, came to see her engine fort

Left Southampton on 9th Oct., 1865
On her maiden voyage; despite troubles, she thrived

Her next five voyages were also to Brazil
Then transferred to Caribbean route, she was thrilled

Rhone proved her worth by weathering several storms
But who can escape when Mother Nature performs?

On 19th Oct.’67, Rhone and Conway
Bunkered in Great Harbour, where they stayed for few days

San Narciso Hurricane, last of the season,
Worried both captains - ferocity, the reason

Passengers from Conway were transferred to the Rhone
Conway was too soon foundered by the storm full-blown 

Rhone struggled to get free, her anchor was caught fast
It was cut loose as Captain Woolley thought it best

To escape to open sea was the Captain’s plan
Sailing ‘tween two islands, avoiding Blonde Rock’s span

When Rhone was less than 250 yards from safety
The winds threw her into Black Rock Point directly

The lurching crash sent Captain Woolley overboard
The ship broke in two, causing engines to explode

The bow in 80 feet, the stern in 30 feet,
Rhone sank swiftly, the “unsinkable”, now dead meat

123 killed, were buried on Salt Island
On 29th Oct., Rhone met her sad end, unplanned

The wreck of the Rhone is now a famous dive site
Turned into a National Park , she’s a rare sight

Today, it’s visited by hundreds of tourists
And in a way, the historic Rhone still exists.



11.05.2021



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For Robert James Liguori's "A Noteworthy Ship" contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 11/12/2021 11:02:00 AM
Thank you for bringing us the poetic story of the historic Rhone! Delightfully crafted poem, congrats on your placement.
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Date: 11/12/2021 10:23:00 PM
Thank you, Robert:) the theme made me do quite a research and I am glad that I placed:)
Date: 11/11/2021 10:40:00 PM
Great writing on UK Royal Mail Ship was RMS Rhone. I, in fact, had not heard about this. Congratulations on this beautiful work.
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Date: 11/5/2021 4:29:00 PM
Another one I have not heard of. I wonder how many different ships get written of for this contest!! I did mine on one made famous in a song and I do not know if others did that same ship or not! (not posted yet) Anyway, I hope to see YOURS on the winner list, Jo
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Date: 11/5/2021 3:21:00 AM
Love stories of the sea Jo, I hadnt heard of that one very informative verse. Best of luck in the contest and enjoy your weekend.. Tom
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Date: 11/5/2021 12:21:00 AM
A singularly great story, Jo. Great details. Best for a win.
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