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The Revolution Is Futile Near Cemeteries Noise

The revolution is futile near cemeteries noise (To the oldest of me, of course, my son Ahmad in my birthday) Introduction Cut out my soul as shirt Wrenching the heart arteries Boot strap of your shoes The poem The patched soul with raw dreams And soft body which was stained at cicatrixes of war And crowded broken heart as falling leaves trampled a track These are my only signals refer to my being In a room like storm dreaming of blowing Oh, my baby Allowed me to say Tonight and objectively I couldn't do anything Because what happened Happened always And what didn't happen Didn't happen And we always improve toward the worst

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/20/2013 9:33:00 PM
A Lovely poem, even the last line is sad. We can dream one day we will improve for the better!
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Date: 12/9/2012 6:18:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your poem with me, you write very well ... you are skilled!!!! - - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Faleeha Hassan
Date: 12/9/2012 8:04:00 AM
Thank you dear(Anne Lise Andresen) to your feelings What you write wonderful Really
Date: 12/7/2012 9:13:00 PM
Faleeha this is a powerful write.... I can feel what you are saying.
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Faleeha Hassan
Date: 12/8/2012 9:18:00 AM
You know why? Because You are a real poet Thank you my friend Joan Marie

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