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The Revelation of Us

Here is my revelation, I look at you with intrigue in my eyes. When I say it, please don't deny. Loving you is tangible. But not loving you is impossible I find it hard to navigate, my feelings for you But I know they're true My spontaneous mind Throws caution to the wind You see I look upon your fixation The way you look at me I know you see it too We must give in to this temptation Please don't patronise the way I love You were sent from a portal from above Your an angel in disguise And now your forever in my life Loving you, forever mine, forever rhymes

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Date: 2/10/2020 11:08:00 PM
A wonderful piece. Very nicely done. I love the imagery.. :)
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Date: 1/31/2020 2:50:00 PM
Congrats on your win!;)
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Date: 1/31/2020 12:54:00 PM
Thanks Tonileigh for your entry, congrats on a nice placement!
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