The Revelation of Us

Here is my revelation,
I look at you with intrigue in my eyes. 
When I say it, please don't deny.
Loving you is tangible.
But not loving you is impossible 
I find it hard to navigate, my feelings for you 
But I know they're true
My spontaneous mind
Throws caution to the wind
You see I look upon your fixation
The way you look at me 
I know you see it too 
We must give in to this temptation 
Please don't patronise the way I love 
You were sent from a portal from above 
Your an angel in disguise 
And now your forever in my life 
Loving you, forever mine, forever rhymes
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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poemtheart Avatar
February 10, 2020 at 11:08 PM
A wonderful piece. Very nicely done. I love the imagery.. :)
Chiri Avatar
January 31, 2020 at 2:50 PM
Congrats on your win!;)
Hamilton Avatar
January 31, 2020 at 12:54 PM
Thanks Tonileigh for your entry, congrats on a nice placement!
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