The Revelation of Modern Slow Times Vs Young

How does it feel to feel and be recalled?
                             As a teen, so slow to rise yet quick to fall;
                                 Away so righteous and never wrong;
                              Surrounded by your dreams of miseries;
                                     While flowing down the Missouri;
                                          I challenge you to ponder;
                                      Hold your head up  and wonder;
                                 This is the event of a learning and yet;
                You'll have to come up to past this, this which is life's test;
                 Stop and look to the heavens skies stop being on the run;
               We have the greatest things the latest things in technology;
                           but slowed down, held down is my seniority;
                                        This is the revelation;
                   It's the revelation of modern slow times versus the young;
   The youth today are now so slow, slow down I AM tried such and too much   
                                                 in dismay;
                             Often being accused, struck down and used;
                       won't git up  out of bed, won't do as God has said;
                      won't stand on their own two feet most often obese;
                         I am obsessed with my own self righteousness;
                                      by the slowness of their craft;
                                   So I too shall fall, crawl and hide;
                                   Keeping my playbook by my side;
                                     Hold your head up and wonder;
                         this is the event of learning and yet I still ponder;
                   You'll have to come up to past this, this that is life's test;
 Stop and look to the heavens into the skies stop being on the run, what's left;
                                         don hold your breath
                                                  Breathe
              Stop and look to the heavens into the skies stop being on the run;
                                         This is the revelation;
                              I am not trying to make you run fast;
                    It's not about the water you soak up in a sponge;
                                      Or drink in a clay-glass;
            This is the revelations of modern slow times versus the young;

Written by James Edward Lee Sr.

for UNO's Poetry to Bridge Generations entry2014(c)
Aug 1 2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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