The Return

The quiet, at the beginning
Is suddenly disrupted by a rush
Of light and sound
Chaos and confusion
Drive and dominion takes course
Lack of experience and insight the source
Accelerating away from the initial calm of what once was

The quiet in the midst
Is burdened by the distraction and discord
By need and necessity
Other wills and other ways
Light and sound now complicate
Deeds and desires resonate
Increasing the distance and diminishing the importance of what once was

The quiet before the end
Now lost from time, tide and total disregard
Dark and delusional
Where all that remains removed
Is coloured and consumed
Life and longing to the acknowledgement of what once was

The quiet in the beyond
Returns
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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September 16, 2026 at 8:23 AM
I've really been enjoying your poem and the emotions and imagery were so vivid that i could easily picture them as beautiful illustration. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist, and I'd love to help bring your story to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il : akiracomicart2@ or on inst@ akiraa_artly
Agustin Avatar
April 19, 2024 at 6:20 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Mason Avatar
December 11, 2009 at 12:27 PM
One to ponder, reread and enjoy!! Hope you have a wonderful holiday Christian and that 2010 is a great year for you and yours!!
Golden Avatar
November 21, 2009 at 12:32 PM
I liked the rhythm in this piece, Christian. Good to see that you are still posting! Hugs, Donna
Nutter Avatar
November 16, 2009 at 3:02 AM
Excellently written work. I loved the ending. Making it one of my favorites. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit
Heck Avatar
December 8, 2008 at 11:21 AM
Dear Christian - A haunting and visceral poem yet, poignantly penned. The reader can feels the writer's angst, reflections and deep emotions. Hope all is well with you. Wanted to stop by and wish you and your loved ones a Happy & Blessed Holiday season. Peace and happiness always, John
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