The Restless Dream of You

Bejeweled, fifteen hundred miles high
Reaching into her sky: We....
Are getting old before our time
We'll leave the television as the radio behind
Stepping out of time; beyound their night
Sprawling on these fringes be her city
We are meant to board her; where all is One
Love and she is us this beautiful bride; embellished
Majestic's bright kryptonite; Your, the talk of the town: Victoria.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 5/4/2014 8:10:00 PM
Vey Good Poetry. You know I have read you so much over the years, it feels warming to see what you are up to on here. Perhaps I will always be a bit of a woman/ child; girlish, but I want you to know it is in the art of poetry. Many great loves I have had in life, mostly by getting to know them, and in cleanliness. I look to the stars some times and think of them. You, it is much of the the artist way, penetrating my soul. Your friend in poetry, Love, Lucinda
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Date: 5/3/2014 8:42:00 PM
BRAVO..Jeremy... I love tis poem... Stepping out in time... I am trying to decide which line I like best but I can't i love them all.. Awesome writing Brooke
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Date: 5/2/2014 12:19:00 PM
WOW!! great write.. skillfully written lines.. good job my friend, jeremy!! :o]]
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Date: 5/2/2014 10:57:00 AM
Great write Jeremy! Such talent.Thanks for sharing this write with us. Peace, Deborah
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