The Release

a brown manatee
swims at last in blue freedom—
then drowns in whirlpool
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Dietrich Avatar
October 31, 2023 at 2:49 PM
Love it! Congrats
Throne Avatar
October 31, 2023 at 7:38 PM
Thank you Andrea!
Fowler Avatar
October 30, 2023 at 1:48 PM
Oh hoho Ben. Very clever! Congratulations! :)
Throne Avatar
October 30, 2023 at 1:51 PM
Thank you very much!
Miller Avatar
October 30, 2023 at 9:02 AM
Too funny; congratulations
Throne Avatar
October 30, 2023 at 9:06 AM
Thank you!
Allison Avatar
October 30, 2023 at 7:59 AM
ha ha ha this is priceless humour:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Throne Avatar
October 30, 2023 at 9:06 AM
Thank you so much!
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