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The Relay Race

The relay race starts with a bang as rain comes pouring down. The starting runner, Spring, flies by in her bright flower crown. Baton gets passed to Summer, who so glowingly appears right at the very moment that the massive rain cloud clears. The crowd all loves this golden runner, who too soon is gone. The sun shines brightly on her as she passes the baton. The third one, Autumn, plods through leaves and nearly takes a Fall, then passes off to Winter, who proceeds at such a crawl - for she showed up in sweatpants, knowing snow had been forecast. Each spectator cheers loudly when the finish line is passed. But when that race is over, then a new one's soon begun with all the fans excited to see how THAT race is run!

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Date: 4/22/2020 1:52:00 AM
Aren't we all running a race in this life? Paul the Apostle admonished us to run the relay race in such a manner so as to win the ultimate prize. A very inspiring piece of poetry my dear friend John. Thank you for being an inspiration. Love and hugs!
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John Watt
Date: 4/22/2020 11:37:00 AM
Nice connection to the Corinthians passage, Gideon. Glad this little seasonal relay could be of inspiration to you! Enjoy your day and stay safe.
Date: 3/2/2020 5:57:00 PM
I enjoyed your take on this contest theme, John...Congratulations! Regards // paul
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Date: 3/2/2020 5:59:00 PM
Paul, I appreciate the read and the feedback. I enjoyed your entry as well! ~ John
Date: 2/29/2020 7:43:00 PM
what a unique take on the contest theme, congrats on your win John:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/29/2020 9:14:00 PM
Thanks Jan - congrats to you! Hugs ~ John
Date: 2/29/2020 7:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in my "What's In A Number" contest! This is a creative way of displaying all four seasons.
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Date: 2/29/2020 9:13:00 PM
Juliet - thanks for such a fun contest and the placement!
Date: 2/29/2020 7:02:00 PM
hey we both got fourth place and I am happy as a lark. I adored this one, John. Congrats for the win.
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Date: 2/29/2020 7:11:00 PM
Don't forget, you can't say the number! Congrats back at ya
Date: 2/11/2020 10:22:00 PM
John, Very nice passing of the baton in this race. Don't forget Frankie Valle's band effort. -Richard
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Date: 2/11/2020 11:30:00 PM
Yep, the 4 Seasons. Made some great music back in the day. Unfortunately, for the contest I wasn't allowed to use the number "4". Thanks for dropping by, QTR.
Date: 2/11/2020 5:36:00 PM
Wonderful. Just wonderful. It puts my entry to shame
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Date: 2/11/2020 7:39:00 PM
So sorry, didn't mean to poem shame you! But thanks for the kind words and best of luck to you in the number contest!
Date: 2/11/2020 2:38:00 PM
what a wonderful way to describe the coming of seasons. Never the same , but always at the same time. Enjoyed reading your verse. Thank you for the congratulations on POTD. Eve
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Date: 2/11/2020 4:48:00 PM
Hi Eve, thanks, and you're welcome! It's always a pleasure to read your poems and your comments ~ John
Date: 2/11/2020 2:21:00 PM
This is so energetic and snappy, great expression of movement, love the idea of the seasons as a relay race!
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John Watt
Date: 2/11/2020 4:46:00 PM
Hi Michelle, I'm John. Nice to meet you. I hope to get over to your site soon to read some of your poems. Thanks for the great comment! ~ John
Date: 2/11/2020 6:59:00 AM
Great take on the contest, John. Love the wit...my only wish is that Old woman Winter wins the race and quickly takes off her sweats and joins her hubby for a long summer's rest (lol) Best wishes in the contest. Charlie
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Date: 2/11/2020 10:18:00 AM
Charlie, what a great ending you suggest! Thanks for the fun comment, I'm glad you liked it ~ John

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