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The Refugee

Warming myself in the fire of the sun, why must the soil be so cold? Listen closely, and I'll show you a story of ancestors I never knew They had a place like this that they called home, or so I was told Watch intently; I'll unfold my own fable heard before you like they grew Down the blackest hole, the richest safety I would know, I began to take hold Wait patiently; here comes a thin line of green brought by a stream of blue In good time, don't prop me up now! No trust; I will hold my own crown You sleep so calmly without remorse in your house for hours eightfold I've been sweating all night, hoping that morning won't come, only to cut me down Then you come with hands and fingers, pulling out the nails that held together the place I made anew Now, I'm just another refugee; controlled by the view you hold

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Date: 4/22/2024 5:11:00 AM
You have painted a picture of loss. I feel like a refuge in a land that is taking away rights guaranteed in the Constitution to those born here and stay quiet in the process. Citizens have no value.law is skewed. Anyone can get a guante e d income now plus a free cell phone plus room and board and never work! That is the side never told. Pangie xx
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Date: 4/22/2024 7:08:00 AM
I totally agree, A system that was designed to assist people in their Darkest Hour has been abused. It truly is sad that the abusers don't see that they're just failing themselves. I'm happy that you enjoyed this writing! Your friend A.S.
Date: 4/18/2024 11:11:00 AM
This is a poem of daggers. I am sorry for your feelings in this- being a 'refugee'- I sorta can relate. A poignant poem, A.S.
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Date: 4/18/2024 12:34:00 PM
Funny isn't it how the feelings of a fresh cut flower can invoke the feeling what it must be like to be a refugee. I appreciate your friendship greatly Paige! Warmly A.S.

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