The Reflection

There is a glass across the sea, that reflects the life of me. Every time I look into that glass, I can see you there with me. The reflection is so real - that even though the years have passed, I still see you next to me. The love that we once shared - that glass holds it there. The glass will always reflect the life you lived with me. When the sun goes down at night, the reflection goes away, but come the morning light, I still see you by my side...
10/272012 Written by Lucilla M. Carrillo for The Reflection contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Posey Avatar
February 24, 2013 at 12:06 PM
beautiful Work is displayed here. Your mastery of phrasing is well exhibited here..... I'm enjoying your postings..... Jake
Leyva Avatar
January 7, 2013 at 10:16 PM
Very, very nice..
Gasun Avatar
November 3, 2012 at 11:34 AM
Two thumbs up for this beautiful poem you creatively write for the theme Lucilla! Sun always shines in our life giving the best reflection. This is a winner for me. Have a grace-filled day always! love/hugs:) Leonora
Sathasivam Avatar
October 31, 2012 at 7:09 AM
Excellent write. Well penned. Tfs
Ink-U-Script Avatar
October 30, 2012 at 9:24 PM
I really love how you penned this piece of art of yours..good luck on the contest.. :)
Andresen Avatar
October 30, 2012 at 11:57 AM
Reflection in the sunshine ...... everything is brighter and easier in the sunshine. - A lovely poem that will reach high in the contest Lucilla. -Good Luck !!! - oxox always / / Anne-Lise :)
Madonsela Avatar
October 30, 2012 at 6:20 AM
I REALLY LIKED IT, BUT THE STORY WAS A BIT TRAGIC . BUT THEN THE BEST STORIES ARE SAD ONES. THE WRITE WAS TRULLY AMAIZING LUCILLA *SMILES* RoN
St.Cross Avatar
October 28, 2012 at 12:57 PM
‡ Beauty In Love. You Brush It Red Carmine Hues, Beautifully Sweet Beautiful Lucilla. Thank You For Your Kind Most Appreciated And Lovely Visit. Have A Very Beautiful Day. My Love, Rachel *
Horsman Avatar
October 28, 2012 at 9:57 AM
I love the way you have written this, good luck for the contest...
Kendrick Avatar
October 28, 2012 at 8:32 AM
Reads like winning material..Thanks for stopping by..Good luck in the contest..I really enjoyed reading this creative work this morn..Sara
Kovrlija Avatar
October 28, 2012 at 1:52 AM
lovely poem
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October 27, 2012 at 8:59 PM
Lucy, this is a wonderful poem.... i wrote a reflection poem tooo.... the see reflect most gracious of your soul....good luck in the contest.... enjoyed your poem* Goodnight! Always~ PD
Dietrich Avatar
October 27, 2012 at 10:24 AM
Nicely done for the contest. I really like your entry. Yes, it has snowed here already. YUK
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