The Redhead Down the Hall- Collaboration

Magnetic fascination
Provokes intoxication
As I feel deeply compelled
To exalt admiration
From the Redhead 
Who lives down the hall

I feel deeply compelled
To be dreaming
Of the redhead 
With the creamy white skin
And intoxicating green eyes
Who lives down the hall

for contest FINETUNE THIS COLLABORATION sponsored by Line Gauthier
7/12/19
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Gauthier Avatar
August 5, 2019 at 6:13 AM
Thanks for entering my contest. Fun element - you really bring that redhead to life, Timothy. Congrats.
Mcguire Avatar
August 5, 2019 at 4:03 PM
thank you friend
Laurie Avatar
July 12, 2019 at 8:41 PM
G'day Timothy … any chance that you can take up sleep walking - thanks Timothy - Lindsay
Mcguire Avatar
July 12, 2019 at 9:48 PM
Yup!
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