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The Red River

The River runs fast
The red mud falls from the walls
Impressions soon left behind
Natures story told
Like the rings on the large trees
The red stain remembers all...

Copyright © Sharon Ruebel | Year Posted 2010

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Andrea Dietrich

January 4, 2011 at 4:50 PM

this one is really good, Sharon. The last line is a great ending!

November 29, 2010 at 7:49 PM

A great choka Sharon. The imagery is superb. Thanks for the kind comments.

Poet Destroyer A

November 28, 2010 at 3:44 PM

I was wondering what was a Choka, enjoyed Sharon! Good poem,, about a tragic way of mother and her nature,..enjoyed,..p.d.

November 26, 2010 at 5:14 PM

The Red Rivers have so so many memories, and not all of them flow away. Capturing Choka Sharon >> James

November 26, 2010 at 4:37 PM

Fine observation and equally penned well to paint a picture, Sharon

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

November 26, 2010 at 4:31 PM

Lovely images Sharon in your Choka tonight.. visual picture painted in wonderful words so expressive luv.. happy weekend ...

November 26, 2010 at 3:13 PM

Good one..Nature tells its story softly to those who listen..I am glad that I chose this one to read this eve..Sara

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