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The Red River

The River runs fast The red mud falls from the walls Impressions soon left behind Natures story told Like the rings on the large trees The red stain remembers all...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/4/2011 4:50:00 PM
this one is really good, Sharon. The last line is a great ending!
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Date: 11/29/2010 7:49:00 PM
A great choka Sharon. The imagery is superb. Thanks for the kind comments.
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Date: 11/28/2010 3:44:00 PM
I was wondering what was a Choka, enjoyed Sharon! Good poem,, about a tragic way of mother and her nature,..enjoyed,..p.d.
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Date: 11/26/2010 5:14:00 PM
The Red Rivers have so so many memories, and not all of them flow away. Capturing Choka Sharon >> James
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Date: 11/26/2010 4:37:00 PM
Fine observation and equally penned well to paint a picture, Sharon
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Date: 11/26/2010 4:31:00 PM
Lovely images Sharon in your Choka tonight.. visual picture painted in wonderful words so expressive luv.. happy weekend ...
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Date: 11/26/2010 3:13:00 PM
Good one..Nature tells its story softly to those who listen..I am glad that I chose this one to read this eve..Sara
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