The Red Parasol

How did I meet Alfred Glendening?
I was fascinated by his latest painting.

I stood mesmerized by the colours.
A painting of a summer outing.
It brought me some solace and warmth.

The painting was of three ladies arriving to the Surrey coast,
in a fast buggy filled with picnic baskets,
towards their favorite secluded beach away from it all.

Nurse Betty was strict as ordered by her master,
and would not allow Lady Elizabeth to bring her beau
to accompany them to the outing.  The young lady was furious,
face red like Little Frances’ parasol.  Oh was she mad.

To make things worse, Little Frances would not leave 
her sister alone, and needled her by opening and shutting 
the red parasol in her face.  Angry, Lady Elizabeth moved away 
and went for a walk along the shore of the beach,
fuming and cursing beneath her breath and kicking sand.

Nurse made the child sit down and gave her a-talking to.
This was not the Victorian way of behaving.
Idly, Little Frances twirled her red parasol.

The Royal Academy’s bell rang for closing time.
That’s when I stopped day-dreaming.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Hind Avatar
April 12, 2026 at 10:01 PM
interesting :)
Rolland Avatar
April 9, 2026 at 1:00 AM
outstanding poem, don't know so much people, well written poetry, thanks a lot
Etgen-Baker Avatar
April 8, 2026 at 5:33 PM
engaging story! well penned
Dietrich Avatar
April 8, 2026 at 11:38 AM
You are always good with stories, Victor. Using paintings to inspire stories is always a creative idea
Goldsmith Avatar
April 8, 2026 at 11:37 AM
"The Red Parasol" is a wonderful write/story from the first line to the last line. I enjoyed reading. Loved the great surprise ending. Have a very blessed day writing away..............
Kendrick Avatar
April 8, 2026 at 5:32 AM
I like your ekphrasis about the artist work. He was a very talented artist from what I have seen of his work. Thank you for sharing this imaginative work with us. Sara K
George Avatar
April 8, 2026 at 5:10 AM
You are an amazing story teller and your poems often have a surprising twist at the end. I could never suspect you were dreaming.
Empress Avatar
April 8, 2026 at 4:00 AM
You have a great way with storytelling, such an engaging read dear Victor! Honestly how you paint imagery and how your words flow so well is always so beautiful and seamless, shows how profound you are as a poet! I thought of also school days, nostalgic! Pleasure reading you today! Sending you light always
Daniels Avatar
April 8, 2026 at 2:59 AM
Aah Wow! Quite a colourful picture you’ve painted, of the summer outing. It kept my attention. I don’t know the painting but you’ve certainly given it a very viable story. Interweaving Red throughout the poem gave it vibrancy. Well done. Have a beautiful day, Vics.
Edmonds  Avatar
April 8, 2026 at 2:09 AM
A wonderful story/poem about ‘The Red Parasol painting’ Victor. An enjoyable read… Beryl
Cunningham Avatar
April 7, 2026 at 11:40 PM
Reminds me of being back at school listening to boring lectures and my mind would float off lol. Great storytelling Victor. Hope you had a lovely Easter. Tom
Buehler Avatar
April 7, 2026 at 10:41 PM
What a fun, pleasant daydream you had, Victor! I enjoyed this well crafted poem, and its traces of humor. :)
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