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The Red Or Black Rose

THE RED/BLACK ROSE ------------------------------- If I a placid pond sit Still my shallow grounds Engulfed within the woods Submerged and bound Arrayed with ruby rings Robed in brunette pearls What jewel would justly paint With brush my clearest tint Wouldst any drown the drink The tongue calls a quench Cool and clear as white Atop the moonlit sky Or wouldst the treasuries' trees Reveal arising clips depicting Darkened depths entrenched In deep demise Doth God's glory glide The ornamented floor Moving mortal millions To probe, dip, and dive Beneath the brittle creek In buried ocean mines To touch and taste, then tell Of seas the sands confine If raids of floral floods Could frame the fluid's face As angels frame the figure Of heaven's sovereign God Then pluck the petaled stem The prototyped rendition Of red/darkened rose Which colors my condition ~Poetra Jah~

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Date: 6/23/2013 6:22:00 AM
Good morning, Leonard , reading your beautiful poem once again. congratulations with having your poem featured on the soups home page. Take care and enjoy the coming week. ~XOX~ *LINDA
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Date: 6/16/2013 7:09:00 PM
Leonard, this is very pretty. , a very cool and fascinating first poem on the soup.... This hear my friend is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 6/15/2013 4:52:00 PM
Hello Leonard. Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. My name is Linda; I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest in the future* hopefully I can be one of your first poetry soup friends. You are welcomed to look for me anytime you need certain feedback on any given poem. I look forward in following you and your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community; we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love- LOL) * Always * ;-) Linda
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Date: 6/15/2013 7:24:00 AM
Enjoyed this poem. The second last stanza is beautiful and well written. Welcome to P/Soup--
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