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The Red Moon

caving in the shadow of sun's embrace,

                              new scroll rolled up on earth,

                                   reveals the world's end.







   ** 9th Place Winner in Dave Wood's Contest: THE RED MOON**

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Lynn Marie

August 16, 2016 at 11:27 PM

ooh..what's to come...love the sense of dread..nature is full of mysteries. Terrific writing, a pleasure to read. blessings, lynn

Mark Peterson

May 10, 2014 at 1:07 PM

Signs and tokens, harbingers and omens. I'm glad I didn't pack earlier because I've seen dozens of these. But then maybe comes the one of ones. I enjoyed this poem you cast. Congratulations.

Nette Onclaud

May 8, 2014 at 1:42 PM

love the sense of foreboding, aiyah.. grreeat work; congrats and huggs

Aiyah Torres

May 8, 2014 at 3:25 PM

I love it, Nette...~~~thank you so much!~~ ..here's a hug..^_^

Shadow Hamilton

May 7, 2014 at 3:56 PM

lovely pen Aiyah congrats on win hugs

Aiyah Torres

May 8, 2014 at 10:47 AM

Thank you so much, shadow!~! xoxox

Dr.Ram Mehta

May 7, 2014 at 8:11 AM

Beautiful expressions on the red moon. Congrats on the win, Aiyah

Aiyah Torres

May 8, 2014 at 10:47 AM

Thank you so much, Dr. Ram!!! :O)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

May 6, 2014 at 10:53 PM

Beautiful and real Aiyah ! congrats on ur great win !

Aiyah Torres

May 8, 2014 at 10:48 AM

Thank you, Dr. Upma.!!.. my pleasure to have you again..~~ ^_6

Paul Callus

May 6, 2014 at 5:54 PM

Very good write AiyaH, taken from an original angle. // congrats for once again being on the winners' list. // paul

Aiyah Torres

May 8, 2014 at 10:49 AM

'Thank you, Mr. CAllus... my gratitude to have you.. :O))

Vera Duggan

April 16, 2014 at 7:45 PM

How you put those words down on paper like that Aiyah is wonderful, you certainly have a way with them, clever girl, and thank you for the message on Peter's comment, Take care.............Vera...........

Aiyah Torres

April 17, 2014 at 7:11 AM

Hi Vera... I'm so glad to see your comment on my poem ,dear!!! //:O)) Thanks a lot!! I hope you're fine and be happy always.. ^__^ Thank you for supporting me here in this site... my honor to meet you and Peter.. :O))

Andrea Dietrich

April 16, 2014 at 4:20 PM

wow, you took it the prophetic route. WELL done.

Aiyah Torres

April 17, 2014 at 7:17 AM

Hey Andie... Oh..thank you so much for keep on reading my poems..and for a COMMENT you always left... Happiness... that's what you gave me!... big hugs!!! :O))

Poet Destroyer A

April 16, 2014 at 3:40 AM

Hi Aiyah, you will do well.... I was shaken ever so slightly upon witnessing the unholy bloody moon...... gosh, you took your poem, to a whole new different level... xox...linda.

Aiyah Torres

April 16, 2014 at 7:23 AM

Hello dear PD!!! ..oh my ... I was shaken too much w/ this comment... you're an inspiration ,Linda!! Thank you for believing in me... :"(( ( wanna cry... huhu )) ...wanna hug you a lot dear friend!!! ... :0*)

Arthur Vaso

April 15, 2014 at 10:10 PM

very beautiful, loved it!

Aiyah Torres

April 16, 2014 at 7:19 AM

Thank you arthur for sparing a time to read my poem.. !! :O)

Jeremy Street

April 15, 2014 at 6:45 PM

Closing Time, An Old Song From Her 90's In Every Ending A New One Begins....Saying, `If You Loved ME Then Would Rejoice For I Said I Am Going Unto `MY FATHER *.* LORD OF THE HARVEST (* THE BEGINNING, AS ALSO THE END`....Chambers In Her Oceans The Vesture Of Her Heavens Their Dens As Viles Await Her Lightning Birthed These Four Winds Shall Call! 'The Red Moon: Son Of Man, Prophesy Unto Their Bones....Man, Girl I Dig Your Poe...Love, Jeremy

Aiyah Torres

April 16, 2014 at 7:17 AM

Amen to this... THaNK you for this wonderful message ,Jeremy!!! .. :O))

Eileen Manassian

April 15, 2014 at 3:43 PM

Very deep write. Yes, these are the signs of the times we live in. The end will soon be here. I do believe it. Thanks for the reminder, my dear.

Aiyah Torres

April 15, 2014 at 3:49 PM

Hi Eilee, thank you sweetie for visiting my land of letters and words... my hidden paradise ..^_^ your comment is a delight!! ..have a fun fun weekdays!! :O)

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 15, 2014 at 1:25 PM

- Deep thoughts dear friend AiyaH - beautifully written - Tomorrow comes a beautiful sun rise.... just for you ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Aiyah Torres

April 15, 2014 at 1:44 PM

Hi Anne!! ...my precious friend, thank you for always have a time to visit me and leave my poem a heartwarming comment... :O)) more hugs and love shower you everyday!! ^__^

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