The Red Lantern

She lights her red lantern again today
Which midnight rain had reduced
To flimsy, gross paper.

Her previous lantern
Had blazed too strong, burning down,
Dying a red death:
She now dares not light fire
When sky promises no rain.

Wet lantern laid limp
Set aflame under the rain
Dead love laid unloved.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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July 1, 2013 at 10:15 PM
A GOOD WINNING VERSE ................ GOODNIGHT *SKAT
Dietrich Avatar
June 28, 2013 at 7:55 PM
Very nice, and congratulations for your win.
Sirak Avatar
June 28, 2013 at 8:26 AM
Brilliant poem Congrats on your win
Gorelick Avatar
June 27, 2013 at 6:51 PM
Not read your poems before..sure like this one. congrats on your win. BG
Johnson Avatar
June 27, 2013 at 12:59 PM
Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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June 5, 2013 at 5:13 AM
- A touching and beautiful poem, Adam - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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