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The Red Lantern

She lights her red lantern again today Which midnight rain had reduced To flimsy, gross paper. Her previous lantern Had blazed too strong, burning down, Dying a red death: She now dares not light fire When sky promises no rain. Wet lantern laid limp Set aflame under the rain Dead love laid unloved.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/1/2013 10:15:00 PM
A GOOD WINNING VERSE ................ GOODNIGHT *SKAT
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Date: 6/28/2013 7:55:00 PM
Very nice, and congratulations for your win.
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Date: 6/28/2013 8:26:00 AM
Brilliant poem Congrats on your win
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Date: 6/27/2013 6:51:00 PM
Not read your poems before..sure like this one. congrats on your win. BG
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Date: 6/27/2013 12:59:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/5/2013 5:13:00 AM
- A touching and beautiful poem, Adam - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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