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For 2025 Poetry Marathon Mile 25 Poetry Contest sponsored by Mark Toney

The Red Hat

‘Twas in another century
On a desolate, dreary day 
When something red from skies above
Wafted into the land of gray.

It slowly drifted in the sky,
Then lit on the head of a boy.
For reasons that are unexplained,
It filled his heart with joy.

But the land of grey - it had rules,
Whether they be written or “un-“.
Here every hat must be grey,
And exceptions there would be none.

The notice of the king’s two henchmen,
This violation did not escape.
They took it upon themselves,
The youth’s behavior to reshape.

Perhaps it bothered those big men
To hear that cap say, “look at me!”,
But who can translate words said in “hat”?
It could have screamed “I am free!”

The soldiers were dealt three more cards
And those were number, age, and size.
They grabbed and tossed up that red cap 
Back and forth high in the grey skies.

The lad could not catch that dear hat.
Those brute’s mouths filled with laughter.
The tike was separated from his joy
Which he desperately ran after. 

Why’d these bruisers enjoy their jobs?
Was it just control to maintain? 
Or the simple joy of sharing
The pleasure of inflicting pain?

While we do not know the answer,
We know they hid the hat so trusty
And relegated that red headgear
‘Neath a chair, dark and dusty.

This once political prisoner  - 
Did he escape?  Forgotten instead?
He performed his mystical magic 
And is now sitting upon my head.
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Ashley Avatar
January 2, 2026 at 6:59 AM
Dear David, congratulations for your success in Mark's contest. Such a emotive and evocative poem. You capture the essence of childhood; bullies, freedom and that special spice.. "magic", with poetic finesse! Warmest wishes for a happy new year, my poet friend.. ~Susan
Crandall Avatar
January 2, 2026 at 8:50 PM
Thanks, Susan. Nice to have a comment about one of my "oldies".
Toney Avatar
November 1, 2025 at 12:56 PM
David, love your modern fable that applauds individuality ahead of blind conformity. Congratulations on your top 10 win on Mile 25 of my 2025 Poetry Marathon Contest. Keep your running shoes on, because Mile 26 has already started. Only 1 mile to go before the Qualifiers’ Final Placement contest!
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November 3, 2025 at 6:45 PM
Thanks, Mark, getting toward the end!
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