The Red Cape of Mars

The Red Cape
Of mars 
Captures this
Florescent wind
In a time machine
Then, hurls
This vessel 
Beyond these 
Sacred stars
Comfort me
Red cape of Mars
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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February 21, 2009 at 5:47 PM
Wow, Gregory! I love the "flourescent wind in a time machine." Mars has always fascinated me, too. In fact, some scientists have speculated life on Mars led to human existence on Earth. Watch the movie: "Mission to Mars." It's awesome, just like this great, thought-provoking poem. Thanks for sharing it with me. The title truly intrigued me and I'm glad I had a chance to read it. Love, Carolyn
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