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The Red Cape of Mars

The Red Cape Of mars Captures this Florescent wind In a time machine Then, hurls This vessel Beyond these Sacred stars Comfort me Red cape of Mars

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/21/2009 5:47:00 PM
Wow, Gregory! I love the "flourescent wind in a time machine." Mars has always fascinated me, too. In fact, some scientists have speculated life on Mars led to human existence on Earth. Watch the movie: "Mission to Mars." It's awesome, just like this great, thought-provoking poem. Thanks for sharing it with me. The title truly intrigued me and I'm glad I had a chance to read it. Love, Carolyn
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