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The Red Barn Remembers

The red barn stands, silhouetted against the sky. An oak tree wraps its tired limbs about her as if to protect her from time and age. Her roof is sagging, color faded , An errant plume of red along her frame. Yet, proudly she stands, remembrance of a happy time. Shelter from the rain, children Playing in her hair, lovers hiding in her shadows. Beauty I see now, not bright, not boastful. With dignity and respect she bows to age.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/14/2010 4:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 9/21/2010 4:21:00 AM
Congratulations on this nice win in the contest, Barbara
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Date: 9/21/2010 4:11:00 AM
Congratulations Barbara on your win in John Heck's contest "Encore". Love, Carol
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Date: 9/21/2010 2:18:00 AM
An amazing poem indeed. many congratulations on this win.
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Date: 9/20/2010 7:24:00 PM
Congrats BG on your winning poem in the Encore contest.. another beauty .. another beautiful win tonight to enjoy with luv..
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Date: 8/20/2010 10:05:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your awesome poetry with us today Barbara. I enjoyed reading your writing this morning. I am hoping you have a wonderful weekend and find loads of inspiration along the way. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/19/2010 8:47:00 PM
Enjoyed this poetry this evening and definantly read from you. Have a great night.:)
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Date: 8/19/2010 4:55:00 PM
Very expressive and descriptive write that brought back memories..Good luck in the contest with this sure winner..Sara
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Date: 8/19/2010 3:46:00 PM
Just love this, Barbara! I have written poetry about an old barn in the past.....I love old barns, and living in the country...the history, and nostalgia....bring such feelings of my grandparents, and memories of childhood. Love this!
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Date: 8/19/2010 1:09:00 PM
Wonderful poetry BG and if for the contest for John.. good luck.. your imagery is among the very best .. with luv.. ciao..
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Date: 8/19/2010 12:49:00 PM
Love this one. I am surrounded by old barns both red and bare, and oaks, so this is like a snapshot of my space....well done..TAH
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