The Red Barn Remembers

The red barn stands, silhouetted against the sky.
An oak tree wraps its tired limbs about her
as if to protect her from time and age.
Her roof is sagging, color faded ,
An errant plume of red along her frame.
Yet, proudly she stands, remembrance of a happy time.
Shelter from the rain, children
Playing in her hair, lovers hiding in her shadows.
Beauty I see now, not bright, not boastful.
With dignity and respect she bows to age.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kendrick Avatar
October 14, 2010 at 4:41 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
Mehta Avatar
September 21, 2010 at 4:21 AM
Congratulations on this nice win in the contest, Barbara
Brown Avatar
September 21, 2010 at 4:11 AM
Congratulations Barbara on your win in John Heck's contest "Encore". Love, Carol
Mannan Avatar
September 21, 2010 at 2:18 AM
An amazing poem indeed. many congratulations on this win.
Sweetheart Avatar
September 20, 2010 at 7:24 PM
Congrats BG on your winning poem in the Encore contest.. another beauty .. another beautiful win tonight to enjoy with luv..
Brown Avatar
August 20, 2010 at 10:05 AM
Thank you for sharing your awesome poetry with us today Barbara. I enjoyed reading your writing this morning. I am hoping you have a wonderful weekend and find loads of inspiration along the way. Love, Carol
Rich Avatar
August 19, 2010 at 8:47 PM
Enjoyed this poetry this evening and definantly read from you. Have a great night.:)
Kendrick Avatar
August 19, 2010 at 4:55 PM
Very expressive and descriptive write that brought back memories..Good luck in the contest with this sure winner..Sara
Richards Avatar
August 19, 2010 at 3:46 PM
Just love this, Barbara! I have written poetry about an old barn in the past.....I love old barns, and living in the country...the history, and nostalgia....bring such feelings of my grandparents, and memories of childhood. Love this!
Sweetheart Avatar
August 19, 2010 at 1:09 PM
Wonderful poetry BG and if for the contest for John.. good luck.. your imagery is among the very best .. with luv.. ciao..
Hill Avatar
August 19, 2010 at 12:49 PM
Love this one. I am surrounded by old barns both red and bare, and oaks, so this is like a snapshot of my space....well done..TAH
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