The Red Balloon

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The little girl set free the red balloon it flew over a certain death free from the pain of auction the little girl ||||||||||||||||||||||| ||||||||||||||||||||||| ||||||||||||||||||||||| ||||||||||||||||||||||| ||||||||||||||||||||||| ||||||||||||||||||||||| ||||||||||||||||||||||| ||||||||||||||||||||||| ||||||||||||||||||||||| ||||||||||||||||||||||| |||||||||||||||||||||||

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Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 11/5/2018 1:37:00 AM

What would Nena say?

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/29/2018 7:35:00 AM

Ha ha, you shredded this one nicely! I like how your mind works. If I do this with Oats will they go up in value?

Paul Callus

Date: 10/9/2018 1:59:00 PM

Your creativity shines through, Arthur. Banksy and his shredded painting come to mind...Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/8/2018 11:08:00 AM

I enjoyed this. The illustration was necessary for getting it!

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/8/2018 7:02:00 AM

Oh brilliant, love it, i wonder Arthur if it was destroyed after being purchased, and if so surely he destroyed someone else picture,,or was that the point?...clever poem,,,

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 10/8/2018 3:42:00 AM

its great

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 10/8/2018 2:06:00 AM

Great stuff. I had hoped that the buyer (at a ridiculous price) would have to settle for a loss of a fortune. But now I read that the painting has doubled in value. Strange times...

Darren White

Date: 10/8/2018 1:06:00 AM

That is so beautiful. It makes me cry, and that picture you used, is so great