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“Neither desire nor aversion Meditation our immersion Conditioned beliefs discarded Hymns we hum are our own version”
I am a true rebel- for I question the words of my catholic rigid rules. And will rise up to claim my self-expression, keeping the parts that are like precious jewels. Spiritual freedom is my obsession . . . I do not want to be like the mindless ghouls. (working on my poem still)
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