The Reality of Poetry

I still can't write

Why?

....do people 

think

ideas come

Flowing, flowing

here

flowing, flowing

there

pushing, moving,

ideas 

who knows where.

While that

is not the truth,

It is the

fakest reality,

for the 

smart and the dumb,

just like me.

I still can't write,

Why?
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Andresen Avatar
January 23, 2018 at 2:29 PM
- Hello Fahtma :) - It is a great pleasure to welcome you and thank you for your first contribution here on Poerty Soup - hugs // Sun :)
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January 1, 2019 at 5:28 PM
'hugging back gesture'.
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January 19, 2018 at 11:30 AM
Fahtma, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this marvelous community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I TOO am ready to enjoy and follow you and your poetry if you'd like :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup 2018 :) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
Ihseruq Avatar
January 1, 2019 at 5:30 PM
Your poems are beautiful. They're actually really good, and I liked Silent Voice alot. Keep-It-Up!!! (who am i to say that)
Ja Avatar
January 14, 2018 at 12:36 PM
But that's what you just did. And your thoughts just rid. That's all you have to do. Just write what comes to you. Thank you for your thoughts
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