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The Real Me: Ever-Nightly's Craving; Thirst (Deleted Scene In the "evernightly" Series)

trapped in a suffocating heat, caged in branches like an animal in a cage, my prince has vanished, my eyes are suddenly filled with a red and black rage, boiling deep in my core, running hot in my veins and heart, i feel the need start, to scream, to shed tears and blood, i am no longer in control of my body, my thoughts or my actions, all i see is my prince.... i see him bloody and beaten....... i see me standing over him....... drenched in blood that isn't my own,, wallowing in tears that gush down my cheeks, in choking gasps and thine tears, i drown. finally a sight that I've lived to my rep, a sight so devastatingly unsightly, a sight that makes every logical human being fear the half-demon, Ever-nightly. the taste of my prince's blood on my lips stay on my tongue, the scars are permanent, irremovable. strangely, deliciously sweet, i have not experienced a taste like this before, i now realize that.....this...blood..... this sweet, lavish liquid, i crave more.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/30/2011 9:51:00 AM
I dont think it is true couplet form, however, very appealing and deep. I love the theme. ~Randa
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Date: 6/30/2011 11:07:00 AM
Yeah I was trying my hand at writing a couplet...guess i need a little bit more practice...um, yeah...anyway thanks for the comment :D
Date: 4/4/2011 10:19:00 AM
UM ty for the complement on my poem(: and writing couplet's to me is more about the ryhme sceme but you did a good job.
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