The Real Fear

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The fear of darkness seems to threaten most-
     when we are lost and groping in the dark
of self.  We blame unknowns; the devil, ghosts,
     or even God, for fright that comes with stark,

cold, empty blackness.  Courage will depart;
     just like a pearl dropped in a sea of ink,
its glow will die, while fear's black magic art
     revives despair between each hurried blink

of eyes that stare at shadows to incite
     imaginary monsters of the mind.
But oft, these visions are the mirrored sight
     of what we see within as eyes are blind-

for darkness lights and magnifies the whole
     dim panorama of the troubled soul.


October 12, 2014

Contest: Fear Is Liar
Sponsor: Sotto Poet

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 1/23/2023 9:28:00 AM
Utterly amazing! You have my deepest gratitude for winning in my contest. SANDRA.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/31/2023 5:09:00 PM
Thank you, Sotto Poet, for offering a great contest and for my nice placement and uplifting comment. Much appreciated. Sandra
Date: 10/9/2018 12:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your fine win, Sandra.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/15/2018 7:01:00 PM
Thank you so much, Subimal! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 10/8/2018 2:11:00 PM
An incredible sonnet, and that final couplet is just rife with meanings!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/15/2018 7:00:00 PM
Thank you very much, Jesse! Sandra
Date: 6/26/2016 12:39:00 AM
Beautifully done my lovely friend. Congrats on you win. Loved always my lovely smiling friend, bl
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Date: 6/29/2016 7:22:00 PM
Thank you so much, BL. I appreciate your visits and nice comments. Sandra
Date: 6/25/2016 9:48:00 PM
A 7! Sandra, one can reach the depth of your heart!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 6/29/2016 7:22:00 PM
Thank you for your lovely comment, Balveen, and for the 7! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 6/25/2016 5:45:00 PM
Congratulations....deep and intense poem
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Sandra Haight
Date: 6/29/2016 7:21:00 PM
Thank you very much, Janis. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 6/25/2016 4:09:00 PM
Great to read this one again congrats Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx
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Sandra Haight
Date: 6/29/2016 7:21:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jan. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 6/25/2016 3:27:00 PM
Wonderful. Well done Sandra.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 6/29/2016 7:21:00 PM
Thank you very much, Jean. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 6/25/2016 3:11:00 PM
Sandra, a wonderful poem lady, congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo
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Sandra Haight
Date: 6/25/2016 6:01:00 PM
Thank you very much, Laura, for another fine contest. I am grateful for my nice placement in your 'worst fear' contest. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 10/31/2015 8:56:00 AM
DAMN!!! Sandra.....that last couplet gave me goosebumps. Congrats on the placement. glad this got a second airing as I missed it the first time.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/1/2015 7:59:00 PM
Hi John, thank you so much for visiting and reading my poem. I appreciate your positive comment, and I am pleased you enjoyed it. Thanks again, Sandra
Date: 10/31/2015 12:22:00 AM
Sandra, Congrats on your nice win, have a nice one on Halloween, LUV SKAT
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/1/2015 7:59:00 PM
Thank you so much, Skat. Sandra
Date: 10/28/2015 12:25:00 AM
Fear is the imagination whispering..... this is a great piece, flows so well, love it. Congratulations, Sandra. Viv x
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/1/2015 8:00:00 PM
Thank you so much, Viv. I appreciate your supportive comments and congrats. Sandra
Date: 10/28/2015 12:03:00 AM
Congrats on superb win Sandra with this amazing write!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/1/2015 8:01:00 PM
Hi Dr. Upma, thank you so much. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 10/27/2015 12:41:00 PM
Sandra, congrats! You have won once again! Love, Balveen
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/1/2015 8:01:00 PM
Once again, thank you for your visit and congrats, Balveen :) Hugs, Sandra
Date: 7/11/2015 2:48:00 AM
Sandra:) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups, Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Date: 10/25/2014 11:08:00 PM
Who does not sometimes wonder if there are monsters under the bed. Hyperdimensional entities that creep from shades and shadow. Vivid imagery Sandra. God bless.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/26/2014 7:25:00 PM
Hi Ronnie, I am glad your enjoyed my poem. Yes, one never knows ?? Thanks for stopping by. Sandra
Date: 10/14/2014 10:16:00 PM
I am only afraid when I am in a house completely alone which isn't very often, I have my dog. Well done Sandra. Congratulations on your win.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/15/2014 9:02:00 AM
Thank you for your positive comment, Brenda. Glad you have "man's best friend" to protect you; your dog will never let you down. Sandra
Date: 10/14/2014 9:45:00 PM
Lovely and unique take on the theme, Sandra, congrats
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/15/2014 8:59:00 AM
Thank you so much, Dr. Ram. Sandra
Date: 10/14/2014 3:55:00 PM
wow, very good writing and excellent meter. I need to see the contest results to know how well this one did in the contest. I hope it scored high . BIG congrats to you, dear.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/14/2014 6:43:00 PM
Thank you again, Andrea! Always nice to receive supportive and encouraging comments! Sandra
Date: 10/14/2014 12:13:00 PM
a unique take on the monsters theme many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/14/2014 6:48:00 PM
Thanks so much, Jan...definitely not halloween monsters!! ): Hugs back to you! Sandra
Date: 10/12/2014 10:24:00 PM
Well written sonnet Sandra! Enjoyed it! Good luck in the contest! ;) love and light! Xxxx D.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/13/2014 9:40:00 AM
Thank you, Dorian, for your nice comment. Have a wonderful day. Sandra
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