Notes About The Poem

The Real Fear


The fear of darkness seems to threaten most-
     when we are lost and groping in the dark
of self.  We blame unknowns; the devil, ghosts,
     or even God, for fright that comes with stark,

cold, empty blackness.  Courage will depart;
     just like a pearl dropped in a sea of ink,
its glow will die, while fear's black magic art
     revives despair between each hurried blink

of eyes that stare at shadows to incite
     imaginary monsters of the mind.
But oft, these visions are the mirrored sight
     of what we see within as eyes are blind-

for darkness lights and magnifies the whole
     dim panorama of the troubled soul.


October 12, 2014

Contest: Fear Is Liar
Sponsor: Sotto Poet
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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January 23, 2023 at 9:28 AM
Utterly amazing! You have my deepest gratitude for winning in my contest. SANDRA.
Haight Avatar
January 31, 2023 at 5:09 PM
Thank you, Sotto Poet, for offering a great contest and for my nice placement and uplifting comment. Much appreciated. Sandra
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October 9, 2018 at 12:51 AM
Congratulations on your fine win, Sandra.
Haight Avatar
October 15, 2018 at 7:01 PM
Thank you so much, Subimal! Hugs, Sandra
Rowe Avatar
October 8, 2018 at 2:11 PM
An incredible sonnet, and that final couplet is just rife with meanings!
Haight Avatar
October 15, 2018 at 7:00 PM
Thank you very much, Jesse! Sandra
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June 26, 2016 at 12:39 AM
Beautifully done my lovely friend. Congrats on you win. Loved always my lovely smiling friend, bl
Haight Avatar
June 29, 2016 at 7:22 PM
Thank you so much, BL. I appreciate your visits and nice comments. Sandra
Cheema Avatar
June 25, 2016 at 9:48 PM
A 7! Sandra, one can reach the depth of your heart!
Haight Avatar
June 29, 2016 at 7:22 PM
Thank you for your lovely comment, Balveen, and for the 7! Hugs, Sandra
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June 25, 2016 at 5:45 PM
Congratulations....deep and intense poem
Haight Avatar
June 29, 2016 at 7:21 PM
Thank you very much, Janis. Hugs, Sandra
Allison Avatar
June 25, 2016 at 4:09 PM
Great to read this one again congrats Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx
Haight Avatar
June 29, 2016 at 7:21 PM
Thank you so much, Jan. Hugs, Sandra
Murray Avatar
June 25, 2016 at 3:27 PM
Wonderful. Well done Sandra.
Haight Avatar
June 29, 2016 at 7:21 PM
Thank you very much, Jean. Hugs, Sandra
Scars Avatar
June 25, 2016 at 3:11 PM
Sandra, a wonderful poem lady, congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo
Haight Avatar
June 25, 2016 at 6:01 PM
Thank you very much, Laura, for another fine contest. I am grateful for my nice placement in your 'worst fear' contest. Hugs, Sandra
Lawless Avatar
October 31, 2015 at 8:56 AM
DAMN!!! Sandra.....that last couplet gave me goosebumps. Congrats on the placement. glad this got a second airing as I missed it the first time.
Haight Avatar
November 1, 2015 at 7:59 PM
Hi John, thank you so much for visiting and reading my poem. I appreciate your positive comment, and I am pleased you enjoyed it. Thanks again, Sandra
A  Avatar
October 31, 2015 at 12:22 AM
Sandra, Congrats on your nice win, have a nice one on Halloween, LUV SKAT
Haight Avatar
November 1, 2015 at 7:59 PM
Thank you so much, Skat. Sandra
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October 28, 2015 at 12:25 AM
Fear is the imagination whispering..... this is a great piece, flows so well, love it. Congratulations, Sandra. Viv x
Haight Avatar
November 1, 2015 at 8:00 PM
Thank you so much, Viv. I appreciate your supportive comments and congrats. Sandra
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October 28, 2015 at 12:03 AM
Congrats on superb win Sandra with this amazing write!
Haight Avatar
November 1, 2015 at 8:01 PM
Hi Dr. Upma, thank you so much. Hugs, Sandra
Cheema Avatar
October 27, 2015 at 12:41 PM
Sandra, congrats! You have won once again! Love, Balveen
Haight Avatar
November 1, 2015 at 8:01 PM
Once again, thank you for your visit and congrats, Balveen :) Hugs, Sandra
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July 11, 2015 at 2:48 AM
Sandra:) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups, Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
Tian Avatar
October 25, 2014 at 11:08 PM
Who does not sometimes wonder if there are monsters under the bed. Hyperdimensional entities that creep from shades and shadow. Vivid imagery Sandra. God bless.
Haight Avatar
October 26, 2014 at 7:25 PM
Hi Ronnie, I am glad your enjoyed my poem. Yes, one never knows ?? Thanks for stopping by. Sandra
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October 14, 2014 at 10:16 PM
I am only afraid when I am in a house completely alone which isn't very often, I have my dog. Well done Sandra. Congratulations on your win.
Haight Avatar
October 15, 2014 at 9:02 AM
Thank you for your positive comment, Brenda. Glad you have "man's best friend" to protect you; your dog will never let you down. Sandra
Mehta Avatar
October 14, 2014 at 9:45 PM
Lovely and unique take on the theme, Sandra, congrats
Haight Avatar
October 15, 2014 at 8:59 AM
Thank you so much, Dr. Ram. Sandra
Dietrich Avatar
October 14, 2014 at 3:55 PM
wow, very good writing and excellent meter. I need to see the contest results to know how well this one did in the contest. I hope it scored high . BIG congrats to you, dear.
Haight Avatar
October 14, 2014 at 6:43 PM
Thank you again, Andrea! Always nice to receive supportive and encouraging comments! Sandra
Allison Avatar
October 14, 2014 at 12:13 PM
a unique take on the monsters theme many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Haight Avatar
October 14, 2014 at 6:48 PM
Thanks so much, Jan...definitely not halloween monsters!! ): Hugs back to you! Sandra
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October 12, 2014 at 10:24 PM
Well written sonnet Sandra! Enjoyed it! Good luck in the contest! ;) love and light! Xxxx D.
Haight Avatar
October 13, 2014 at 9:40 AM
Thank you, Dorian, for your nice comment. Have a wonderful day. Sandra
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