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how i see things through the oceans of my eyes salt 

Sleepwalking existence Lost under the act of humanity a transparent veil whispers through creeping battle for middle earth has begun Coldly so much in-differences plays out shape-shifting this world's virtue Infected with so many parasites filled with hate Greed begins manufacturing rats of war Getting rich destroying life's even nature into the bargain bucket Millions are starving Human values let's count the cost Many raped and tortured on a daily basis hospitals, schools and places of worship destroyed weddings and funerals bombed come on lets be frank about subject matter Has man become so blind stupid uncaring beings against creations flowers Has history not learned us anything Move out of this blind spot The cold cut of steel awakens aggression is a direct violation of world law Which is held within rights not to be ignored council of the good living folk The same seed of elite bodies holding purse strings correct Control a conscious mind makes choices under values which side of the fence they sit morals Beast's of this planet destroying animals you know no grounds for peace a burial right against good living souls Rights are being diluted in front of our eyes Bats from hell looking down your nose At us whom you consider slaves Exploiting our worth Decreased minimum set wage As the standard of living becomes poorer Falling into a backward spiral position of truth becomes a society filled with dirty underhanded secret deeds Nerve to expose highlights reveal behind an optic scene

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Date: 2/28/2017 8:15:00 AM
Hi Liam!:))Wow! Wow!This is a very powerful, outstanding poem you've written here my dearest friend Liam.All so beautifully penned with truth n' caring.Yes,very sadly the world we live in these days is completely a mess, Liam.All the very sad, terrible events, injustices everywhere, make my heart n' soul very sad.Prayers are very powerful, we need pray more for all Liam.The Bible is very clear about all these n' more in the future.Another very beautiful sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.Excellent piece!Awesome!A true glowing gem!Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7+++ ++!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything.Please keep positive n' very strong.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers,Liam.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely day!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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