The Reaction To His Poetry

it tastes like spoiled chunky year old milk
from a broken wine glass
left in a burning shack
hidden deep within a green forest
barricaded by a black haunting mountain
i mean my old lover's mansion
at least it was spacious to me..

and it tasted like something..

it tastes like he brought my love as barters beg for freedoms
inexpensive love
bruises from broken wine glasses love
nurturing and nutritious
spoiled
free-falling on the Milky Way
love
tastes similar and simplified to doves taking flight
love that breathes life
love that hides
that bobs and weaves
love that survives
but i am sick from spoiled chunky year old milk
and tastes disappear

for his poetry is all that i hear..

thunderous
and inharmonic

rainfall is all that i heard..
rainfall is all that i heard..

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 11/17/2015 6:59:00 AM
This is sheer brilliance - And should be acknowledged as such! The poem appears to be loaded with hidden meaning and innuendo...very cryptic. Really enjoyed this one - Excellent! Best regards, Chante! :) john
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Chante Reeves
Date: 11/17/2015 10:06:00 AM
thank you so much!! :)
Date: 11/5/2015 6:24:00 PM
wonderful I love it--Please do check out mines and tell me what you think
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Chante Reeves
Date: 11/6/2015 5:39:00 PM
I will ! & thanks ! =)
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