The Raven Waits

It is cold among the shadows, where heavy tears belong
Behind the gates, and iron locks, where sinking headstones dwell                
Where names that time erases, are deeply etched with tales
One walks here in the dim, gray light, where the ravens weave their spell 
         
There are legends, told in secret.. from deep below the earth...
In whispered tongues, they wonder,...does the raven wait for death?
Black ebony has circled.   Is a feather just a quill?
Or...do the stories hold some merit...are they illusions of the chill?
                                                                                      
A moss covered headstone crumbles, and tumbles with a touch
A raven's gaze seems evil, has he brushed the devil's wrath?
A voice of anguish rises, with an echo from the mist
And the silence comes, and all is still,.....or are legends simply myths?

Black heart, no shame.... a moth to flame
A caw cries out, , ..."how great the cost!"

They perch and watch and find a nest, among the webbed design
The lilies and the laurel...a tangled garden climbs
entwining over markers...that only wither on the vine

A raven waits, as nightfall comes, as fog and returns again
Another night, another life, will end again on time
                                                  
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Inspired By Kelly's Contest: The Raven (Poe)
10/4/14
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Kayode Avatar
October 14, 2014 at 8:50 AM
Congrats Carrie.
Mehta Avatar
October 13, 2014 at 9:56 PM
Nicely painted piece with words, Carrie, congrats
Deschler Avatar
October 13, 2014 at 6:46 PM
I really liked the mystery, and the questions that were asked throughout your poem. The imagery was also very chilling! A fantastic write, Carrie! Congrats on your win!
Ryerson Avatar
October 9, 2014 at 4:19 PM
Chills down my spine!! How do you manage to write free verse with a rhyme scheme? Terrifying and beautiful. Hands down 1st place...
Gasun Avatar
October 6, 2014 at 10:32 AM
Outstanding write my very dear friend Carrie. I enjoyed the read. Good luck in the contest. Thank you so much for sharing! Thank you so much as well for your loving greetings on my b-day. God bless you always! love lots, Leonora
Mcdaid Avatar
October 5, 2014 at 8:23 PM
very beautifully painted piece excellent pen carrie
Yvonne Avatar
October 4, 2014 at 8:06 PM
If this doesn't end up in the top three I'll eat my Raven. Hat. I meant Hat. If this doesn't end up in the top three I'll eat my Hat. I. I don't know where I got Raven. Excellent, poem, loved it I meant Hat.
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October 4, 2014 at 8:04 PM
Excellently penned Carrie. You should so well with this.
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