The Rat

The Rat


The rat sat on the ledge eating some cheese


I said to him " is it Camembert or Lancashire tell me please"


The rat replied "It is creamy and delightful and hits the right keys"


I said "do you play the piano" he said "with consummate ease"


He then had finished his meal and preened himself with his feet and his knees


Then he said "I am a master of the black and white notes passed down from the great Italian rat Vincenzo of Napoli's"


"Shall you play raindrops by Chopin it's my favourite" I said as I laughed and to tease


He said "Of course I will as I can see you are of virtue and I like you to certain degrees"


So I showed him the old piano as he composed himself to play Chopin in the key of C's


The rat was unbelievable and successful in completing the piece so I went to the fridge to find him some cheese


On my return he had gone and left a note saying "It just goes to show that not everything you think is true and you are now one of us who believes"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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A   Avatar
July 7, 2013 at 11:34 AM
Congratulations, with your winning poem .... xox~ PD
Anglesey Avatar
July 1, 2013 at 5:53 PM
Peter, great fantasy and whimsical theme. Love the story and witty character The Rat :) congrats on your win in the contest
Roberts Avatar
June 30, 2013 at 11:05 PM
Wll done Peter. Loved it .......Seren
Posey Avatar
June 30, 2013 at 5:54 PM
Talent laden entry that deserves the win. Although a soft chuckle was heard from the cat when you returned with more cheese.... Congrats... Jake
Eastman Avatar
June 30, 2013 at 11:43 AM
An enjoyable read. Congratulations on your win!
Liwayway Avatar
June 30, 2013 at 9:01 AM
Superb write..very creative write friend Peter. Big congratulations on your win!!! cheers!! hugs, Maria :)
Delaney Avatar
June 29, 2013 at 6:54 PM
Very fun piece......Congrats on your winning place. SuZ
A  Avatar
June 29, 2013 at 3:44 PM
lol, i super loved this one Peter, :-) Congratulations in the Rhyming contest. I'm enjoying all the winners & poems that spoke to me in their own way. enjoy my blog if you like, peace and love. <3<3<3 ~SKAT~
Pettit Avatar
June 29, 2013 at 3:22 PM
Congratulations on your win. You deserved recognition with this clever write.
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