The Rarest Gem

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Tanzanite in my crown glittering bright Jadeite cool touches my breast at a ball Grandidierite graces a ring at night But just one lost my soul will bring a squall Red Beryl Emerald decorates ring A lovely jewel so rare formed of magma Love puts a person's spirit in high esteem A soft blanket warm worn like manta Black Opal's varied colors bring delight Dancing necklace against a little dress Jeremejevite clear to pale blue sight Dazzles searching eyes with lustful distress Let love be the rarest most valuable A rare gem to adorn a crown affable Contest: A Gem For Your Verse Sponsored by: Carolyn Devonshire Written: October 25, 2016

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Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 10/27/2016 6:39:00 AM

Excellent sonnet. You have penned well with a lovely message. Also you have painted with lovely picture. Thanks for sharing it.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/27/2016 9:19:00 AM

Ravi, thanks for the high review of my work..I appreciate your presence at my page..Love is the rarest of gems..Sara

Anna-Marie Docherty

Date: 10/26/2016 5:47:00 AM

Love your display of gemstones in this colourful write. A sure treat for anyone but you are right about the preciousness of love of course... something indeed to treasure and once lost is so hard to replace to same degree... for individuals enrich our lives in ways sometimes we don't see until they are gone...

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/26/2016 6:21:00 AM

Anna, Thanks for dropping by.. I appreciate your presence at my page..I think in so many relationships that one party does something to destroy trust then it is hard for love to come back into play..Your review and comments were so helpful..Sara

Joanna Daniel

Date: 10/26/2016 12:45:00 AM

Wow, so well said, Sara:) lovely sonnet with a beautiful message:) 1 Corinthians 13:13:)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/26/2016 6:18:00 AM

Yes, the scripture reference is a good one for us to read all the time to help us live a better life..It is referring to Agape love which we all should work daily to reach...Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Daniel Turner

Date: 10/25/2016 4:11:00 PM

Ah, the last couplet says it all Mrs Sara. "Let love be the rarest most valuable..." Wonderful:)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/26/2016 6:16:00 AM

Your presence at my page is uplifting..I appreciate you dropping by, reading and taking time to comment..Yes, love is the key to a happy life..Thanks ..Sara